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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Sanabalis
Review:
Nice! It's good to see he's already planning on getting rid of the deadboy. And more importantly, planning to make Buffy his pet! Good sense of priorities.

Edit: Good! Just remember: Planning is essential. Plans are useless.
Comments from author:
Yes, one must have a proper plan of action set out, if you are going to accomplish your goals. ;-)
Review By [Sanabalis] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Definitely a good start on an epic tale!
Comments from author:
Thanks. More will appear as my muse dictates. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
From what I've seen so far, the real danger is Maggie Walsh.

From what I remember, she was a meglomanic. If the gene therapy works, I can see her using it to create her own army.
Comments from author:
Yes, Maggie could be a problem in the future.

But that is only if she's not recognized as the manipulative megalomaniac she is, and I can't see that happening, given the knowledge and memories all three of them now possess.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [7 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Genuka
Review:
Don't forget to inject Giles!
Comments from author:
Not to worry. There is a definite need to eyeglass-polishing in upcoming chapters. ;-)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing cross of Xander's personality with Khan's drive. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. That's exactly what I was trying to show. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
I was rereading this and wondered if twenty years might be a better timeframe, rather than ten years for what Xander wants to do.
Comments from author:
While it might be better as regards what *Xander's* group would prefer, their opposition might not agree with them. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Of course he should know the evil overlord handbook I believe and know what is mind numbingly stupid and ego centric that villains keep pulling in the Trek world as opposed to the one they live in.
Comments from author:
Oh yes. A genre-savvy Augmented who has the history of what happened in an alternate world as a cautionary guide of what to avoid is definitely someone to be concerned about. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cateagle
Review:
My inner punster really wants to suggest "Yes, We Khan!" for a chapter title in here somewhere. I suspect that a lot of folk are going to find themselves wishing all sorts of nastiness on Ethan, where ever he may now reside. Loosing this bunch on the various Power That Be is going to have major repercussions and the ripple effects should be absolutely fascinating..
Comments from author:
Yeah, that line is pretty much *begging* to be used somewhere in this story. ;-)

And while some people are going to be unhappy with Ethan's actions, a great many more are going to end up appreciating his somewhat malicious sense of humor for the results it will produce. ;-)

And as far as the Scoobies are concerned, when have they *ever* followed any orders given them without adding their own interpretations to them? ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
To a certain extent, Xander can be considered to be superpowered.

Augments are twice as intelligent and five times as strong as baseline humans.

http://en.memory-alpha.org/wiki/Augment

Maggie is going to love Xander.
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. They also possess faster reflexes and a far superior immune system.

All of which are going to prove to be of great use in the coming months and years.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from notWorthy
Review:
This story has so much potential right now. I've got goosebumps.

I love it when Xander gets an intelligence upgrade and the will to use it. Superpowers are fun, but they tend to railroad the character along a certain path whether the author intends it or not. A much smarter and confident Xander has a whole world of possibilities and every one of them are entertaining.
Comments from author:
Increased intelligence is its own superpower, and can augment any other abilities a being has so much more potent.

This Xander, in conjunction with his friends and allies, is definitely going to have a significant impact on his world. ;-)
Review By [notWorthy] • Date [7 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Selias
Review:
I'm REALLY looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Comments from author:
WAY out there, that's where! (Points up into the sky.) ;-)
Review By [Selias] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Are you seeing Khan as a name or title?
Comments from author:
Definitely a title.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the new chapter, hoping to read more soon.
Comments from author:
I have some ideas drifting around the back of my mind, but I'm waiting for my muse to decide which ones to incorporate.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bluesnowman
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate the review. ;-)
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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