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Breaking Away For A New Start

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
You had Xander help in killing Grayback? Oh how interesting.
Comments from author:
Yep. If you're gonna screw things up for the other side, do it in a big way. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Now this is some seriously sweet work! Keep it coming!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I will.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
woo-boy, with that admixture of alien bodily fluids working its way into Xander's body, methinks he's in for quite the surprise when he finds out what that "cocktail" has done to him. This has the feel of a most interesting start to a much longer story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm hoping you'll find the rest of the series just as interesting.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Oh fun!
Comments from author:
Hopefully, it will be. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Is this the same Fenrir Greyback as the Harry Potter books?

Raf
Comments from author:
Yep. Which is why I noted that that story line is going to be AU. ;-)
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written brutal welcome to a new town for Xander.
Comments from author:
Yep. Anything involving Fenrir Greyback is definitely going to be brutal. ;-(
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Nice story. Tad confused on how Story 1 got published after Story 2 or was that deliberate on your part?
Comments from author:
Well, I decided to expand on the background of the previous story, so I'd guess that's a yes.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice mix. I look forward to having a piece of the cake when it's finished.
Comments from author:
As long as you bring the ice cream, that's no problem. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BillieBog
Review:
Fun start. I love Xander stories, particularly when he and faith get together -- hint hint
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. And Faith isn't going to be showing up anytime soon, if at all.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my.... what a road trip for Xander ^_^
Comments from author:
Yep. And it's only going to get weirder as it proceeds. ;-)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh dear [polishes glasses], Xander what have you gotten yourself into now.

Great start, I can hardly wait to see where you go from here!
Comments from author:
Well, the typical Scooby response would be usually 'a whole load of shit', wouldn't it?
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
Review:
Nice! Can't wait to see where you take this story set! Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Really interesting start to a series here. I see this entry is listed as finished and the next follows up to Xan with Buffy around the time she's having difficulties with Sunday... Speaking for myself I'd enjoy seeing Xander's education in the way weird stuff works OFF the Hellmouth... Still, a good one shot. Some fun action, established a bit of growth for Xan, introduced someone new, and got some of your entries for the crossover set. Everything a starting story needs.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. I'm intending to flesh out the period between the two stories with at least one or two more stories bridging that gap. When they'll show up is up to my muse.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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