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Review of chapter "A New Love" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
that was sweet. So I have a question is Buffy a regular woman in this world or does she have slayer powers?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from raxadian
Review:
So, is Buffy gonna train her daughter to fight?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from Gideon
Review:
Aww, lovely :) I knew that Buffy's joke would prove to have a kernal of truth. And Nick seems to have accepted a husband for Buffy, which could have been a problem if Jack was seen as replacing Gepetto.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Love" from ShyBob
Review:
Nicely done! I quit watching OUaT after the first season, as it got less actiony and more dramatic. Sick of drama and intrigue. This reminds me why I watched the show in the first place.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from Callista
Review:
Hi,

I love this series, and I really hope you'll continue it...

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from slasher
Review:
This was fantastic! I can't wait for more! It's so nice to read about true love when one's own love fell apart.
Review By [slasher] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I realize you needed to move the story along, but the progression from dating to marriage felt a little too fast and montage-y to me. Also, was Mrs Kemp a nod to Ramona Quimby's neighbor?
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Love" from Christy
Review:
Keep it up my dear...I'm loving the interweaving
Review By [Christy] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Love" from PhantomGuyver
Review:
it's great, still lovin the series
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [PhantomGuyver] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Love" from Jazzibear
Review:
What a charming and beautifully constructed little tale! How lovingly you present your characters! I would by now be reading the rest of the Tanydwr oeuvre on TtH did I not need to deal with some Real Life at this juncture. Sigh.

What delights me also is the excellence of the English prose that you write: several cuts above all but the very best fanfiction on offer on TtH and FF.Net. and all other fanfiction sites that I have encountered, but not overshone by any. All in all, very well done indeed!

There are, it is true, a few tiny glitchlets (that do not in any way detract from my enjoyment): I should be happy to enumerate them if you wish.

Please understand that I mean no criticism: A New Love has given me very great pleasure.

By the way, does your Buckland’s relate in any way to the Buckland Auction House in Season One of Charmed?
Comments from author:
Jazzibear, that was the loveliest review I've received in a very long time! The praise for my prose is particularly appreciated, as I do write original work as well (not found anywhere as yet - maybe one day).

Please feel free to tell me about any glitches or errors - I do my best, but as I do not have a beta, there's bound to be things I miss even after a third or fourth check. I am British, however, so while I do my best to use US dialogue and even terms in the prose (having Buffy think about a car boot instead of the trunk, or trousers instead of pants was actually quite jarring), there are bound to be occasional slip-ups. I make no apologies for British spelling, though! I appreciate the constructive criticism - no one is ever so good that they can't be better.

And yes, Buckland's is pinched from Charmed - it was an auction house in San Francisco, Buffy needed somewhere to work, and it was a nice little shout-out. Glad someone got it!
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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