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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Excellent series! Loved the Scoobies interaction with the bat clan.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JJDudeman
Review:
Very nice. Love how no one knows how little she had to do with planning it!
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Love this series. Would really like to see more. Particularly something relating to Bruce's reaction to digging into Sunnydale, Faith's history and perhaps a more serious crossing of their respective evils (as opposed to the Zombie Turkey)...

I like the idea of Dawn joining the Bat Clan... tell me, does your variant of Dawn do the portal thing or did all of her 'keyness' completely go away... OOOO that would be a neat point of cross... someone finds out she's 'the key' (even if she isn't anymore) and it's up to the Scoobies and Bat Clan to work together to save her from their nefarious scheme... (and of course we KNOW Dawnie isn't going to hide away for safe keeping) ;)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RogueAngel
Review:
Love this series! I really love stories that have the scoobies blend in with the capes. Especially love it when one of said scoobies, becomes a cape. Are you going to be adding any more to the series?
Comments from author:
I am, it's kind of an "as inspiration strikes" kind of thing, which is why they are all one-shots.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
been awhile since I've been on so I'll review the other stories in this series as soon as I can. it's great to see you writing again I've missed you so much you bring a truly unique feel to this website. your writing seems to have improve and you flow is fabulous great job on the characters and 'painting the picture' by that I mean the way you describe the scene and the action that takes place. very well done!

*Hugs&Kisses*
Comments from author:
Thank you! It has been a while, hasn't it? Of course I haven't been on in about 3 months myself, so I'm getting back to you late. RL got in the way of things. I'm glad to see you are still about though.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Well done, Dawn! Just as long as no one expects her to SING as Nightingale, things should be as okay as they ever are for a family of champions. :)
Comments from author:
Oh lord, no singing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jaylynn
Review:
Good story but now I really want to see the bat clans reaction to the news. I can already see Tim having some idea about it since he has that weird friendship with Faith but even if the others have the feeling something isn't right, the truth is a lot weirder.
Comments from author:
Actually next update is all about Tim and Faith's wierd friendship.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamTurner
Review:
Very irritable when he didn't find it out already.
Comments from author:
That's exactly why lol.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
A brilliant addition to this series! I was wondering how long it would be before Dawn had enough of sitting on the sidelines while her loved ones fought. I'm also glad that the Bat family is finally going to learn about Dawn and Buffy; I've a feeling that learning all of what Dawn has to tell them will assuage at least a bit of their worry, though not all of it by any stretch of the imagination.

Thank you for the update! As always, I'm very much looking forward to reading more whenever the muse decides to grace you with its presence.
Comments from author:
Well the muse has already demanded some Faith and Tim friendship posts, so we'll see how soon it is!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RogueAngel
Review:
love it love it love it. a more realistic spin on if Dawn became a Mask. coz seriously there would be no keeping her away. plus i loved the fact you named her something normal. but supernatural or mythical etc, something i could see a hero using. I love this series, and i hope to see much much more of it.
Comments from author:
Yeah I think she was slowly losing it as they locked her away and went off to fight.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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