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Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from serenityselena
Review:
things are never easy for Buffy and the gang....
hope to read more soon :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from yuiop
Review:
Loved it!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Eureka
Review:
Please Please let us see what you had written and threw out! I never did get to see the last season as I had no TV and have no idea how it went in cannon. As for the last 2 chapters, I LOVED them! There are so many ways that you can go with this and I can only hope that you continue.
Comments from author:
You may get to see some of what was thrown out, as I'm trying to rework some of my favorite bits into the new chapters, but if it doesn't work with the revised story, I'm not going to force it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
well this was a good chapter so I think you are back on track. hoping for more soon. : )
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from starwolf
Review:
i've just finished this in one sitting. you have a outstanding grasp of the character and produced a truly great story. I look forward to more. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Kateydidnt
Review:
Technically, no DNA test will prove 100% paternity. They always have to leave a margin of error so inclusion tests are something like 99.99% accurate and only disproved if you have an identical twin or something. It is a niggling almost non existent difference, but one Abby would know and acknowledge as a scientist.
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from kiwi
Review:
this chapter was worth the wait. no complaints.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Wheeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So very happy to see an update on this story! And, for the sake of all Powers now or ever, please ignore current NCIS canon. *makes very sour face* And if the reason you threw out several already written chapters is recent NCIS canon, please bring them back! Sometimes even the best tv series go haywire and this is one of those cases, at least in my honest opinion, though not all by effort of producers/scriptwriters.

As much as I loved every single aspect of this chapter, especially early morning in the Gibbs household, I loved Dawn's slippers the very best. Those slippers made me laugh out loud and grin from ear to ear. As for that dream... Whoo, boy...yeah, this story is no where near finished unless the bits the dream were about are for a sequel, which I have to admit I would very much enjoy. I am still very greatly enjoying this story and fully intend to keep following it, no matter how long in between updates.

Thank you kindly for the new chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Dragan
Review:
LOL Tease!


I approve!
Review By [Dragan] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from jebbypal
Review:
Oh I'd forgotten how much I enjoy this. I think you did well with the continuation. Looking forward to more
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Don't be nervous! I know personally, I am just so pleased to see an update. You made my morning. I have been enjoying this story since day one and look forward to many updates to come. (I look forward to Jackson meeting Dawn and Buffy). Thanks!
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
this was an excellent update :) Welcome back :D
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from burmafrdnow
Review:
keep it up!

my opinion: keep Jethro's father alive for a while longer. He has GOT to meet Buffy and Dawn.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And don't worry, this story is set midway through season 9, so the girls get some time with their grandfather before he goes. My holding off until after I'd digested the season 11 finale was because I was sure they would reveal more about Jackson, and I wanted to make sure what I'd written wasn't going to be instantly contradicted by canon. (Some of it would have been.)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Harry
Review:
Its good to see you back on this story! I was wondering when it would return from the dead. Its good to see Buffy/Shannon and Dawn bonding with Gibbs. And Jethro, taking a day off?!? Is there a apocolypse on the way that we don't know about?!? And why do I get the feeling that Ducky is about to get a double grilling from Abby AND Ziva? Don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! I can't wait to see this grilling!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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