Sorry I am so late reviewing, I have been on vacation. Catching up is weirdly spotty. I am absolutely thrilled that you have posted more to this fic. I enjoyed most of it a lot. I REALLY don't like Ziva so I can't say that I enjoyed that part of the fic, but I do realize that it moves the plot along...AND I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, it would be kind of cool to have Ducky meet Giles and vent about his sister. Then, Giles could explain to him the "Real Truth" about the "Chosen".

This is wonderful, can't wait to see how this plays out especially the Big Reveal(tm). I sense much misunderstanding and confusion in the future here

This story continues to be amazing. I can't wait to see how things go when Dawn is brought back in (poor McGee), and when Buffy and co get to town.

I hope Gibbs can keep himself in check so as not to alienate them right off the bat. And to accept their help on the vampire case (God knows he's not likely to hand it over wholesale).

Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

I'm so happy to see a new chapter up for your great story. I ran into 'Unspoken Rule' a while back and fell in love with it right away. All of your characters feel just like their TV counterparts and I especially like how you've made Dawn still feel like Dawn, only believably grown up. Interesting storyline too. Nothing feels contrived or pulls me out of the story. Riley and Graham feel like they both belong in Washington and are integral to the plot, and NCIS investigative procedures all seem plausible. Great stuff. Your pacing is also great. I feel like I could read this one forever and never get impatient for the characters to discover all the hidden truths. I do admit that I'm really looking forward to Buffy and Gibbs meeting though. I've always felt sorry for both characters losing their family like they did, although Gibbs much more so. I can't thank you enough for the time and effort you put into this great story and I'm SO looking forward to your next update.

Well this got really interesting really fast. Im hoping to see more in the future.

good chapter, coming along nicely, keep up the good work, byes

great update.

You've built up the suspense levels beautifully, but hopefully we'll see Buffy and Gibbs finally meet within the next few chapters.

Thanks for writing this and keep up the good work.

I can't wait for the meeting

Lovely update. I hope that we do not have to wait so long for the next installment. It's so hard to wait. I end up thinking of this story randomly while waiting, even if it's been weeks since I read the last chapter. It's that compelling. I hope to read more soon.

Oh man, what a fantastic update- You are building up a whole shit ton of suspense for the coming showdown just a day away (in story). I can't wait to see what you bust out next and how it all plays out.

I can't wait for Buffy to meet Gibbs! Update soon!

Great Story-Looking forward to more.

I like it. I really like the characterization of Dawn and Buffy.

That blood spot in Gibbs' basement had never occurred to me. You've got decent dialogue, in-character-ness, a LOT of nice little original touches like the blood spot & the 'Faith is B's sister' prank, but perhaps most impressively, an impressively successful pace. Hard to do that with longer fics. Bonus points for a better-than-most Riley & Graham.
I think Gibbs bought into vamps too quickly, or too smoothly without there being a reason, but to be honest, I don't really care and wouldn't want the story to get hung up on it.
So after I complemented your pacing, I'm gonna contradict that say gimme the rest of the fic NOW!! This one's got a unique tone to it I wanna see more of!