Review of chapter "For Every Action" from liferscove
Review:
great update.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from Cordyfan
Review:
You've built up the suspense levels beautifully, but hopefully we'll see Buffy and Gibbs finally meet within the next few chapters.
Thanks for writing this and keep up the good work.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from DarkTopaz
Review:
I can't wait for the meeting
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from dreameralways
Review:
Lovely update. I hope that we do not have to wait so long for the next installment. It's so hard to wait. I end up thinking of this story randomly while waiting, even if it's been weeks since I read the last chapter. It's that compelling. I hope to read more soon.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
Oh man, what a fantastic update- You are building up a whole shit ton of suspense for the coming showdown just a day away (in story). I can't wait to see what you bust out next and how it all plays out.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from Darksidhe
Review:
I like it. I really like the characterization of Dawn and Buffy.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from JJDudeman
Review:
That blood spot in Gibbs' basement had never occurred to me. You've got decent dialogue, in-character-ness, a LOT of nice little original touches like the blood spot & the 'Faith is B's sister' prank, but perhaps most impressively, an impressively successful pace. Hard to do that with longer fics. Bonus points for a better-than-most Riley & Graham. I think Gibbs bought into vamps too quickly, or too smoothly without there being a reason, but to be honest, I don't really care and wouldn't want the story to get hung up on it. So after I complemented your pacing, I'm gonna contradict that say gimme the rest of the fic NOW!! This one's got a unique tone to it I wanna see more of!
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from Anglachel
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Great story so far. I really like the pacing, nothing seems too hurried, and everyone behaves believably. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Anglachel] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
I like both BtVS and NCIS and this is quite an enjoyable blend of the two. While I normally prefer action/Xander fics, the characterization of Gibbs and the background subtle plots are outstanding. Thank you.
Review By [Yar] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For Every Action" from Jazzibear
Review:
This is a wonderful story: I long for more.
I want to write more by way of review (would that I had the ability to write stories), but Real Life keeps getting in the way. So perhaps – more from me later.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
