It definately has potential. I'd say do a few more chapters and see what people say about where you took it before giving a full yes or no to continueing this.
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Strawberry Chocolate Cake::
# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # "I am Grey. I stand between the candle and the star. We are Grey. We stand between the darkness and the light." - Delenn, Babylon 5 # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
I like it and it has definite possibilities if you choose to continue it. I'm going to go out on a limb and recommend and track this. Hope you keep up the good work.
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
