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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. I love that Xander didn't lose his eye when Caleb was removed as being a problem. I do have to wonder about that part when Buffy and Spike were talking about Xander knowing things that he really had no reason to know, does this mean that he is a seer?
Comments from author:
I meant it more along the lines of his observing and deducing things that they didn't think he was aware.
Review By [twlight] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheFoxBoss
Review:
You can't deny it'd be fun afterwards. Xander would be the new underground boss. And he'd make good connections. He'd probably be able to take care of problems before they happen. Like using his sources to find out about the mayor and take care of him before his ascension. He'd also get Faith to work for him.

Also, would you interested in an idea I had for a turned Buffy, Xander, Willow? It's interesting.
Comments from author:
Oh, I never said it wouldn't be fun. ;-)

I just said that Sunnydale is not the kind of town taht you'd want someone like Tony living in, for many of the same reasons you pointed out. ;-)
Review By [TheFoxBoss] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheFoxBoss
Review:
Awesome. Dude, you have to make a full fic on this version.
Comments from author:
I really don't think that Tony Montana is the kind of guy you want hanging around Sunnydale. ;-)
Review By [TheFoxBoss] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Funny. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
That's the problem with some people. They can't think outside the box. For example, Harry Potter could have used something like that with Moldyshorts. Nice story and Xander gets to keep his favorite left eye.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that was definitely one of the benefits of handling things this way, as opposed to Joss' idea. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bashful
Review:
I liked the rather unique crossover.

Of course, this story leaves the reader wanting to know what else this Xander did....


-b
Comments from author:
With Tony Montana as an influence, I would be *very* careful about that. ;-)
Review By [bashful] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
As far as I'm concerned, that's what Xander (with his memories of being a soldier) and the rest of the group should have gone with in the first place, considering the Army base was likely easy pickings by that time. *sigh* But, alas, it wasn't in the script. Thank you for fixing that error!

Lastly, I'm glad Xander pulled a good old M-1911 instead of one of those thrice damned M-9s. I'd take my trusty old warhorse over that peashooter any day and I was not a happy camper when the Army took them away and issued Berretta 9 mils instead, I don't care if that IS the standard NATO round for side arms.... /rant
Comments from author:
Exactly!!! But Joss needed to show that magic is superior to everything else, so we ended up with the idiocies of Season Four and later. ;-(
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
Review:
If I say "Hello little friend" do you laugh, groan or cry? Another great short story.
Comments from author:
Laugh, then groan. ;-)

Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
That I didn't expect. Nice ending.
Comments from author:
Neither did Caleb. ;-)

Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A lot closer to what should have happened in canon, well done.
Comments from author:
Indeed. I really doubt that Caleb was anywhere near as tough as the Judge was, and we all saw what happened to him.

Joss conclusively disproved any effort to make current technology unusable against demons with that episode, despite what he might have said later, or intended.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Great place for a firearm and YAHF
Thanks
Comments from author:
The best place for any sort of firearms is in your own hands, and *not* in your opponent's. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed the story. ;-)
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
Absolutely ruthless. I love it.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Tony was NOT a nice person. So he's the perfect guy to deal with Caleb. ;-)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Buried himself some cock-aroaches, did he? Good job, man.
Comments from author:
Yes, he did.
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
I'm surprised Xander would refer to Xan Jr. as 'little', especially to a girl he was about to bone.
Comments from author:
He didn't. Faith was just threatening to tell people that he said that, as leverage to keep him from ever using that line again.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful! What a great use of a Halloween possession, Tony Montana would make a kick ass left-over!

The Bringers would be a great target for guns rather than swords - well done!

Great story!
Comments from author:
Yeah, Tony was a completely ruthless and cold-blooded bastard, so he would be a perfect opponent to go up against Caleb. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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