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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Reaver
Review:
Please, please, please, please, oh, please continue this story. I absolutely love it so far, and cannot wait for the next chapter.
Review By [Reaver] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from gaulty
Review:
Good chapter, bye
Review By [gaulty] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from removedauthor
Review:
Another fantastic chapter.I can't wait till they encounter sg-1. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from bucksavage
Review:
More nice work in this story,
I hope Resolution returns to former glory.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cdog
Review:
Very interesting so far. I look forward to seeing how things will progress.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I hope your writer's block and plot bunny attacks will ease up enough to allow you to post another one in the not-too-distant future! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you like it.

We will have to see.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
please let the writer's block be banished forever. very good read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I can but hope it will be banished for good. No gurantee though as it seems to have more lives than all three of my cats combined.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Rod
Review:
Interesting stuff. I'm afraid you are very prone to run-on sentences, which makes data dumps like the start of this chapter rather indigestible. Throw in what looks like a severe allergy to commas and I had to concentrate quite hard to stop my eyes glazing over. There's nothing structurally wrong with what you've written, but the lack of punctuation makes it extremely hard going.
Comments from author:
I am aware that it is a weakness of mine, I am trying my best to correct it but it isn't easy.
Review By [Rod] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story and look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad to hear people are enjoying this.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from alynambered
Review:
Also never read the original, this does look interesting.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see the Asgard are being their usual helpful selves :) And the Goauld are being their usual aggressive and warlike selves!
Comments from author:
Indeed.

The Goa'uld are the Goa'uld, they're always going to be aggressive, opportunistic and so on. It's classic evil space overlord which is what the Goa'uld are basically genetically programmed to be.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from purrfus
Review:
Since I haven't read the original version, I have to judge this on its own. Intriguing mix so far.

And stop beating yourself up about chapter content. If it moves the story somewhere its probably worth the time and energy you took to write and we spend reading. The work so far shows us how the ships nd technology compare, gives us details about the crews, and how they interact with each other. So far, so good.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Maltor
Review:
Well this is a 180 degree shift from the original version that had them be this ultimate kick-ass ship to their current crippled status. I guess instead of experimenting to add a hyperdrive to the ship to have the option available, now it's a necessity. And the next big question since this is a pre attack Tollana is will they still be as willing to help or will they keep a more hands off approach to the Federation refugees. Or are you going to do something completely different.
Comments from author:
The Tollan will be willing to help somewhat remember the Tollan rules on tech transfer are for species and worlds that are technologically far less advanced than they are i.e Earth-level tech. Races with similar levels of technology they're probably willing to trade with especially if the ones they're trading with have some technology that the Tollan want.

Plus while the Resolution is crippled right now she's repairable.
Review By [Maltor] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Review:
Well, they and SG-1 are going to be in for a massive shock when they finally meet. *smirk*
Comments from author:
Indeed.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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