I like the angle you took on Jack and Joyce's interaction, you write them well.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'll admit that I was a bit worried about getting Joyce right, since she's such a different character than what I usually write, so I'm glad she sounded right!
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
I liked this a lot, especially the idea that Jack is Buffy's real father (& his concern being more for Buffy than how Joyce dealt with the slayerness of their daughter). I'd really love to see a sequel to this.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Go, Jack! I'd love to read a continuation of this and see how differently (better, maybe?) things might've gone for Buffy during that summer in L.A. and/or upon her return to Sunnydale.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Am I the only one weirded out by the fact that the story before this has Jack sending sex toys to Buffy and in this one he's her father?
Regardless, its a great story.
Comments from author:
Heh. XD I hadn't thought about that, but I can understand how you fell. Sorry. ^^;;; I promise you, though, two completely different sets of Jack and Buffy! XD
Review By [Jearom] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
