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Faith The Female Hercules

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
Review:
I love this one, it is so sweet-spirited. And as for the "tearing a phone book" comment (which was made by another of my favored authors, so no disrespect intended here)? Yeah, it can be done by someone without much in the way of strength (I can and have done it), but part of the "trick" to it is *how* you tear it. Ripping it like Faith did (one hand going forward and the other back)? You gotta have some *real* strength to do that.
Comments from author:
The thing was, because Faith didn't have an act set up, she had to do tricks she could do without special equipment. That limited the tricks Faith could do, otherwise I'm sure she'd have torn up a licence plate,, punched nails through a board, and bent a steel bar in her mouth.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Fun story and unusual.

Y'know almost anybody can do the telephone directory thing, there's a knack to it and you don't have to be particularly strong.

D.
Comments from author:
It was either the phone directory or find a spare car licence plate to tear in half, lol.

Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
I love how Faith (barely) manages to keep her language in check in front of the kids. And the kids love her despite (or maybe because of) her not-so-polished persona. Will she get a call back from some of the dads?
Comments from author:
It's probably because of her not-so-polished persona. Makes her seem more exciting as well as more sincere?

I'm sure the dads asked for business cards, lol.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamTurner
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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