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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AXanFan
Review:
I have never heard of the other characters you have here; but they seem interesting. I love stories about Xander's family and would love to read more. Your writing style is very easy to read & while that may not seem like much of a compliment; it is for an author who really wants to be read. THANKS FOR SHARING - PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from docfeng
Review:
waiting with hope
Review By [docfeng] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lillyb
Review:
Great job.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from docfeng
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thanks-good work
Review By [docfeng] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Ghostrider
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LOL!

First off, I was wrong. Guerrero's rep isn't going to rub off on Xander. It's the other way around! He' hanging with the White Knight! The circles he travels in, that'll really make him even more feared then before. After all, he's good enough to be part of the WK's entourage... Just picturing Winston's and Chance's faces, not to mention the ladies' reactions is so much fun.

As for the threat against Dawn, the bad guys have really stepped into it this time. The question is, who will they fear more, Team Slayer or Team Chance with Special Guest, The White Knight. I think it'll be saver to just stake themselves.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great bonding moment between brothers.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DrDamage
Review:
It's good to see an update and I love the interaction between Xander and his brother and the way Guereros mentl picture of who Xander is undergoes some serious revisions.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ghostrider
Review:
One of my favorite shows, not in the least because of the banter between the three main characters. It really had the same vibe of a bunch of siblings, bickering all the time, especially for such a disparate group.

"No. Just No. HELL NO!"
"Dude, seriously? No."
Cue Chance with the butter-won't-melt-puppy-look...

And now you throw Xander in the mix? There is already a healthy fear of Guerrero going round in certain circles.... His baby brother being in town, I see that same healthy fear being extended towards him, after just a few days. I'm looking forward to see what you've planned for San Francisco's 'underground'.

OH, I hope we get to see the reactions of his 'girls' when Giles lights into them about sending Xander away. I know of at least one who'll be laughing herself silly at the notion of Xander going on a vacation to relax.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from kyzhart
Review:
I love the concept. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarkLee
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I have never read human target before and your story is seriously tempting me too! Very interesting story, can't wait till the next chapter.
Review By [DarkLee] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JonnyNapalm
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This just reminds me of how much I liked this show. First season was really strong...didn't get the same feel for season 2, but it was still fun. Great characters. I really like the idea of Xan and Guererro as half brothers. Their behavior patterns have the same kinda vibe. Looking forward to seeing what else you've got going for this story.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Jaylynn
Review:
This seems interesting so far even though I don't know much about what it's crossed with. I look forward to see where it goes.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from docfeng
Review:
good- more
Review By [docfeng] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun family reunion with comments from the gallery.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from michaelangelo
Review:
Interesting story but I think you have Guerrero wrong, you do know there's at least a 20 year age gap between the characters Guerrero, Willow and Xander? and I can't see Guerrero who is a sociopath falling for puppy dog eyes, even the weakest form of Sociopathy gives "Callous unconcern for the feelings of others." think of him as chipped Spike only his own intelligence keeping him in check, he knows how he SHOULD act so emulates it, but if he gets pissed off he's more than likely going to resort to lethal force then throwing a punch or shouting, simply because it's easier and he doesn't give a conscience.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the advise, but I don't agree. If Guerrero truly did not care for anyone, he would not care about his son, and I think it was proven in several episodes that his son is very important to him, and he would go to great lengths to protect him. I see no reason why this was not also extend to other members of his family. And at 15, he would not necessarily have been as uncaring of most as he became. And I'm ignoring the age difference. That's what I like about fiction. I can get away with it! :)
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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