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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fourmenandanelephant
Review:
Poor Dawn, so busy she can't even play guide to the really hot guy who popped out of thin air... Also, Remiel is another Angel often listed as an Arch as is Cassiel, Jehol and Selaphiel... Also the best part about this story was the thick description such as the flavored coffee which I tried to make once failed at accomplishing but intend to try again...
Comments from author:
Who is listed as archangel differs everywhere, as does the number of archangels. Perhaps Dawn is stuck researching that while Faith gets to play guide.
Well, I guess it's obvious that I really enjoy good coffee...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This seems fun, but the breaking up of sentences to every other line hurts my eyes so I gave up after Dean appeared in the summoning circle. I would advise you switch into a more paragraph style.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Simple concept- and the writing style could have used a bit of work-, but a very interesting bit of work nevertheless, particularly regarding the potential implications of the other angels learning that Dean's just saved one of the Host's most powerful members with a weapon that he could NEVER have used if their original plans had gone ahead...
Comments from author:
The potential implications were my first idea, I just needed a frame around that to get a story out of it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DTHunter
Review:
Interesting. A way to short-circuit the Apocalypse. Go Team Free Will!
Comments from author:
Not really the Apocalypse but the civil war in heaven.
Still, neat answer to that desaster, touching and that was it
Review By [DTHunter] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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