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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This seems fun, but the breaking up of sentences to every other line hurts my eyes so I gave up after Dean appeared in the summoning circle. I would advise you switch into a more paragraph style.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Simple concept- and the writing style could have used a bit of work-, but a very interesting bit of work nevertheless, particularly regarding the potential implications of the other angels learning that Dean's just saved one of the Host's most powerful members with a weapon that he could NEVER have used if their original plans had gone ahead...
Comments from author:
The potential implications were my first idea, I just needed a frame around that to get a story out of it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DTHunter
Review:
Interesting. A way to short-circuit the Apocalypse. Go Team Free Will!
Comments from author:
Not really the Apocalypse but the civil war in heaven.
Still, neat answer to that desaster, touching and that was it
Review By [DTHunter] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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