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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from twlight
Review:
I love this wonderful story so far. The fact that you gave Xander a former Slayer for his White lighter is wonderful and I think very fitting as she will know what he has been through and is able to help him more then someone like oh Leo who is more of a pacifist then a fighter. I would love to know what the reactions of Giles and Willow are when they learn of Buffy telling Xander to leave or she would kill him. I am eagerly awaiting more of this wonderful wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I don't really plan to talk about the gang's reaction to Buffy until the next story in the series. This story however won't be updated for a while due to college getting pretty hectic right now.
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Eureka
Review:
Was wondering how that worked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Sorry it took so long to update I just haven't been really inspired to write this chapter and it didn't seem to flow as well as the other chapters I wrote. I'm still happy with it though.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Excellent...please continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and I'm actually working on the next chapter now. It should be out in the next week or so.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from madamssaiyan
Review:
I am enjoying your story. I think anything that focuses on Xander a good thing.
Thank You
Mark
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it and took the time to review. I hope you continue to read my story.
Review By [madamssaiyan] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Poseidon
Review:
Nice Story! I hope you update again soon!;)
Two things though: 1) What happens in Xanders "Real life", I mean does he finish school in SF, is he reported missing and so on?! 2) I hope that this won't become a bashing story, I mean Buffy was totally confused and hopefully didn't mean it!?
Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
first thank you for the review. Second while I haven't talked about it yet I plan to have Sandra and the Charmed Ones force Xander to continue his education. As for the bashing, well I didn't start this to bash all the characters besides Xander. For my story I needed buffy to act that extreme, but since I haven't even tried to write a sunnydale chapter yet I don't know how the others will react. While I have a vague plan for their reactions sometimes the story takes on a mind of its own and deviates from the plan I wanted to follow. Now that I'm done rambling thank you for the review and reading my story I hope you continue to like my upcoming chapters.
Review By [Poseidon] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from removedauthor
Review:
Awesome chapter and story I look forward to reading the next one and I liked the fight scene you wrote it well.
Comments from author:
Thanks it was the first time I wrote an extended fight scene with so many different characters. Thank you for the review.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from greysh
Review:
Nice crossover :) I hope that you will continue! I like witch xander
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I do plan to continue this story and hope you like my new chapter. I like witch Xander too. Xander as a witch is a really underused plot, but the best fic that I've read that use it is Xander Harris: Bad-Ass Wicca? It is one of the better witch Xander stories.
Review By [greysh] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and for the review.
Review By [Narf] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from snakeyes
Review:
This is an interesting story. I have to wonder if Xanders abilities with fire will become more controlled over the story. Right now he streams and compacts his powers, but if he could form constructs he could potentially deliver the fire and control it. For instance a dozen sparrows constructed of fire and flying towards you could be dangerous but not as damaging to the surroundings.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading my story. As for the powers while his control over it will increase I don't think he'll ever be able to make constructs like that but I am planning on giving him a second power. I have some ideas but if you have any I would be more than happy to here them.
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Studyofchaos
Review:
One, I love this story. Two, yes, cliff hangers are mean and nasty. GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!!! PLEASE!!! Okay, back to normal type. I love that you were able to get Xander and the Charmed Ones together and it's a meeting of "equals". Both kidnapped and both helped in the escape. Keep up the great work and please don't leave us hanging for to long, that would just be cruel.
Comments from author:
This was by far the hardest part to write. I suffered writers block for a couple of months before I just decided to take a break. I'm back now but it will probably be about a week before I update If I get a chapter done sooner that's great but don't expect it.

Writing the charmed ones is the hardest part of the story and I don't know if I'll do it that well but please bear with me and give me all the advice you can. If something doesn't work let me know but if you really like something let me know I'm on the right track.

Thanks for reading and reviewing enjoy the rest of the story.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from snakeyes
Review:
true on the cliffhanger front, unless the author leaves it on a cliffhanger and never updates
Comments from author:
That's true but I don't plan to stop anytime soon. It might take a while for a new chapter but I will be sure to finish this story or have someone finish it for me if I can't.
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
Good cliffy.

And you are right, cliffhangers are just too much fun.
Comments from author:
Thanks I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and keep reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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