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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Bigfan
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I actually found and followed this story on fanfiction. Despite having read it already, I had no problems doing so again. The story is well written and I love that Xander is part of a magical line that's as powerful as the Halliwells. I also like the fact that Sandy is a former Slayer and has been teaching Xander how to fight hand to hand, as well as with weapons and his own magical ability.

It always baffled me that Giles never thought to give the other Scoobies any training. I know it's against Council rules to share that knowledge with civilians, but since Giles broke so many rules on behalf of his Slayer, it never made sense he didn't break this rule and at least offer Xander and Willow some self defense classes. He would break the rules by letting them fight beside the Slayer, but he wouldn't break the rules to train them? Doesn't make sense to me.

If you're taking suggestions, after reading the last chapter, I wouldn't mind Xander having a second power. Maybe telekinesis like Prue's. Since he's already got a power that would be kickass against vampires, telekinesis could help repel bigger demons while he prepares a spell. It's just a suggestion, and I look forward to seeing where you plan to take this story. Hopefully we will eventually get Xander back to Sunndale, cause I for one would love to see a showdown between him and Buffy. Her arrogance(despite her grief) is appalling and I would enjoy seeing her being put in her place. She was Chosen to be the one girl to fight vampires and demons....she was never meant to direct her powers towards a human being that not only fought beside her and helped save her life, but also made a decision that saved billions of lives. A decision she was unable to make on her own. Hopefully his arrival could coincide with Angel's return from Hell, so the resouled vampire could let Buffy know that Xander made the right call.

Once again...excellent writing and great job on this wonderful story. When school and real life finally give you a chance, I'm hoping a new chapter will come out real soon!
Review By [Bigfan] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Harry
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Well, Xander has learned about working with the Charmed Ones and is helping them in working on Vanquishing a demon who used to be a member of the family of witches that Xander is from. Now, its just a matter of time before the vanquishing potion is ready.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Harry
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Something tells me that Xander has just met some powerful allies in the Charmed ones. But he is going to HAVE to learn how to dodge some of these demon attacks!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Harry
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Well, these demons just made a BIG mistake! You burst into the home of the Charmed Ones! Now, prepare for your DOOM!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Harry
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Well, Xander just met up with a member of the Charmed Ones. Took a little work, but he and Paige got out of there. But they are not out of the woods yet. Not by a LONG SHOT!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
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His own book of Shadows. Xander has FINALLY gotten his own book of Shadows. Xander has proved that he is worthy of it and can handle it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
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Well Xander is starting to learn how to use his powers. And he and Sandra are getting along very well. Now, its time for Xander to meet the CHARMED ONES!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Typical of Odin. He's rarely happy unless things are going EXACTLY his way! Well, tough noogies bub!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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Xander a WHITE KNIGHT?! No wonder Odin is interested in him. As he said, Magical ones are VERY RARE! Time to really step up on checking and seeing if Xander is really ready to unleash his powers.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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Nice job by Sandra to bring Lorne in to read Xander's aura. Now, this report is REALLY going to shake the Elders up!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
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Well, the Elders, except for Odin, seem interested in the report that they were given. I suspect a meeting with the Charmed Ones is going to be coming up in the near future.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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I think that the Elders are going to be VERY interested in the news that their White Lighter is going to bring them. It may change their opinion on who they want to assign to Xander.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 2" from Harry
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Xander, a WITCH?! This should be a interesting twist. Now, we just need to see how he works if and when he meets up with the Charmed Ones.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Time to show Buffy that she made a mistake. She is too wrapped up in Angel to see straight. Now, time to see what San Francisco can offer our favorite Zeppo.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from twlight
Review:
I love this wonderful story so far. The fact that you gave Xander a former Slayer for his White lighter is wonderful and I think very fitting as she will know what he has been through and is able to help him more then someone like oh Leo who is more of a pacifist then a fighter. I would love to know what the reactions of Giles and Willow are when they learn of Buffy telling Xander to leave or she would kill him. I am eagerly awaiting more of this wonderful wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I don't really plan to talk about the gang's reaction to Buffy until the next story in the series. This story however won't be updated for a while due to college getting pretty hectic right now.
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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