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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Ashes
Review:
I'm really interested in this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

I have one tinny winny complant though-grammatically speaking, you're supposed to spell out numbers when wrting in a story format.

Update soon!
Review By [Ashes] • Date [2 Dec 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from renelf
Review:
Excellent chapter. I love the 'shebang' comment. You write Lorne really well. I knew Gwen was going to come into it sooner or later. Looking forward to more.
Review By [renelf] • Date [17 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from renelf
Review:
Excellent start to your first fanfic. I love the way you begin at the beginning, it's very Tolkienesque, as is the epic feel to your writing style. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [renelf] • Date [15 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Lemming
Review:
An interesting concept, I'm not quite sure where your going yet, though it looks interesting, keep going.

D.H.
Comments from author:
That was basically my plan - to have a mysterious opening. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Review By [Lemming] • Date [15 Jan 04] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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