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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Okay, this is different. I'm very glad that Ron realized that he had been really stupid and admitted it the very next day in front of everyone in the school.
Comments from author:
The Ron in *this* Harry's worldline s quite different from the idiot JKR saddled Harry with, in canon, and I wanted to make sure that everyone could see that.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
this is a good story so far, I hope to read more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks. Trying to get the next chapter finished, but my muse isn't cooperating. ;-(
Review By [leb] • Date [19 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kdakmmt
Review:
good story. I noticed you didn't say which christmas when you gave your estimate for the next chapter rofl
Comments from author:
Yeah, that's quite true, since my muse has absolutely no sense of time when it comes to scheduling things.

Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Review:
A refreshing spin on the YAHF storylines, and for all of the cool potential this represents, for some reason all my mind can focus on is: will Harry's Patronus change? It could be a hyena, or my favorite, a petite blonde with a stake...

Really enjoyable concept. If well wishes influence your writing tendencies at all, PLEASE continue this fic!

SD
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And the idea of Harry's patronus changing as a result of the possession never occurred to me, so thanks for that idea. Have to see what my muse thinks about it. ;-)
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this sounds like it will be a good story
Comments from author:
Thanks. I certainly hope so. ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Tracking this because I look forward to more. Thank you :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

The next chapter is started, but I work on a number of stories simultaneously, so I can't really say when it should appear.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
I'm so waiting for this story to be extended and expanded as this "new and improved" Harry Potter proceeds to deal with a lot of things in ways that drive Albus, Tom, Cornelius, and their agents crazy. Beyond that, it should prove interesting to see just what team of friends he assembles around him. I'll bet he goes into the final task much better prepared and armed to the teeth.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story so far.

I'm trying to get the next chapter finished, and all I can right now is that it will be done sometime before Christmas.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Robby
Review:
Well, this is an interesting story idea.

I look forward to seeing where you take this story.

Keep up the great work and good luck.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The next chapter has been started, so it's more a matter of finding the time to finish it.
Review By [Robby] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Trying to get the next chapter started, as time and my muse's whims allow. ;-)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
Review:
There is the potential for much awesomeness in this story. Great idea and I would love to see more... Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
::snicker:: Oh, dear!! I wonder who's going to be more inconvenienced by this turn of events, Tom or Albus? In either case, I suspect this is going to lead to a very great departure from canon as *this* Harry proceeds to act on knowledge and power the one in canon doesn't have available. Methinks this is going to make for some memorable moments in the near, and farther, future.
Comments from author:
Harry and company are going to make sure that *everyone* who's not working in their best interests are going to regret ever meeting them. ;-)

And canon isn't even going to visible with a 400x telescope , very shortly. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
Review:
Greywizard, I should have known that I would like this, it's by you! But I didn't know it was you until I had returned to the list of stories after reviewing. Goofy me.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I really appreciate the compliment.

Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
Review:
OH, what an evil cliffhanger! This sounds good, so I think I'll start tracking it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Another start to a potentially great story. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the next chapter as time and my muse allow.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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