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Review of chapter "Ghost Stories" from dizzyspirit
Whole story review:

You are awesome. I see nothing that would stop you from becoming a totally and completely rich and famous author. Sure, there a few repeated words and misspellings but nothing that a good editor couldn't deal with. I have loved every chapter (even the cats and, grudgingly, the addition of Sebastian). I squealed with delight at the LABYRINTH reference and am thoroughly enjoying looking for actors of the Buffy-verse's last names to show up in unexpected places (you did that on purpose, right?). My only question: Your story is labeled as completed (I hope it's not) but it looks like you plan to write more (I hope you are). What's the deal here?

Much love from someone who is incredibly jealous and admiring of you talent.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. This review honestly made my year.
The story is no where near finished but my computer has had a problem and is not working. I am currently borrowing my brothers computer but I can not use it long enough to write with it. I am going crazy over here trying to figure out a solution and as soon as possible I will be writing again! I miss it desperately!
Again thank you for the amazing review!!
Review By [dizzyspirit] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ghost Stories" from (Recent Donor)kribby

I really enjoyed this story. Truthfully, fanfiction limits you-- I feel you could tweak things, remove the BTVS and SPN backstory, and write your own story.

I would buy this as a Kindle ebook in 15 seconds flat.

Comments from author:
Wow, thank you so much! It has always been a dream of mine to write a book. I wouldn't be the first person to rewrite a fanfiction and get published LOL I have a few other idea's that are original that I have considered writing.

It's really nice to hear that from someone though, so thank you very much.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ashes To Ashes" from stargirl
I'm still enjoying this story and hope that you do decide to do a Halloween themed chapter. I like that you kept the Sebastian part of the story short and didn't drag it out for too long as I prefer the original idea of each chapter almost being their own 'episode', with the relationship between the 3 hunters being the longer story. Hope that makes sense and that others will leave reviews.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review stargirl. It really helps when everyone lets me know what they like and dislike with the story.
:-D So glad you are still reading the story.
Review By [stargirl] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm Before..." from stargirl
So far I'm enjoying this story and can't wait for the new chapters each week.
I wasn't sure about chapter 3 and the story about the possessed cats. It just didn't seem to fit in to me, but I really enjoyed the latest chapter and it feels like this story is back on track. I can't wait to find out who the intruder is and how Dawn knows them.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and the honesty. Feedback is always helpful.
And I agree, I kind of felt like the cat idea ended up being more filler than I intended but the point was just for them to take a strange case.
Hopefully you like what I have planned for future chapters. Thanks for reading and again thanks so much for the honest review.
Review By [stargirl] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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