Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Family Duty

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from bradsan
Review:
Alright. I give up. I won't ask for any update's.

Still a good story, so far.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from bradsan
Review:
any chance you gone update this story, cause I wanna read more if possible. It's a good story and good stories and loyal readers deserves some update.

So please strike you heart and muse of course and update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from dreameralways
Review:
OK, given that Buffy has blue hair I can see why he would go ahead with using his blood but why with Dawn? Supposedly he already knows her blood type if he knows that she's not compatible with her mother and is with him. So why wouldn't he at least check if the "regular humans" that came in to see Buffy had the same type before giving his own? Also, are you saying that the contaminant that caused his body to express full mutation is still present in his blood? I can see how that would be a risk to his girls but I'm surprised that his body wouldn't have filtered it out by now.
Anyway, interesting concept. I hope to see more, but please don't have the X-Men just suddenly save the day and make all of Buffy's planning for not.
Comments from author:
I admit blood types and such thing is really not a specialty of mine and that I may have screwed the story using that. Why he didn't ask I don't know I'll try and figure a reason.
I never intended for the X-Men to be the ones that dealt with the Mayor cause there would be other problems coming as well.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ivanjedi
Review:
The MARVEL version of the CCC getting involved? Oh boy, this is some fine mess you cooked up, metinks.
The only problem I see with your story so far is Joyce's attitude; I would have expected something like this in the end of season 2, not season 3
Anyway, with both the X-men and the FOH involved, this is one hell of a graduation ceremony shaping up... no pun intended.
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I can only assume that Joyce put allo the blame on Hank and the others to try to keep Buffy from ever trying to contact him.

I can only assume that Buffy will end up with full blown mutation once her father's blood gets introduced into her system, but it should at least speed her recovery.. Since dawn was based off her, it's rather likely something similar is in the cards for her.

The irony is that Joyce's fears of contamination will seemingly bear fruit.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ChikaraKatherine
Review:
I'm just wondering what Joyces problem is. Does she know Buffy's a slayer? Other than that, I'm very much enjoying my read of this. A lot of good stuff in here. Looks like Hanks many many enemies are about to meet the Slayer. I do hope Buffy lays a few of them in the ground. Giles might be there best hope for shuting Joyce up. If she can't pull her head out of her backside. Things are going to get far messier than they are now. Mr. Sinister would love to run "tests" on a slayer and a key. (If Dawns the key.) Yeah all hecks going to break and Joyce is going to learn the hard way. She's just F*()ed up big time. Sinister is perhaps one of the sickest fucks in the x-man universe. Joyce is in the Firends of humanity? Yeah thats great, she's got two mutant daughters. Yet she's in with those sick fucks. They would gladly murder children for fun. Joyce makes me sick, and I want to beat the holy crap out of her. She's sick. Poor Buffy her mothers a sick monster at the Volemort level. Her hairs natural blue. Plus as thats a cool hair color. But still sick wack job for a parnet. Who thinks murdering pyro sick fucks. (reminds me of the KKK to be honest.) Are a good thing. Buffy has morals, and a code of honor. She never attacked peaceable demons. Buffy takes out things that come looking for her and others. Again both Joyce and Xander really ticking me off. Maybe Sinister could do a little test work on them? Bruital on my part, but call it karma for being bigotted assholes. In Joyce's case anyway. Excellent idea, plots great. Flows good. I hope Joyce gets a really harsh wake up call. When it comes to her Firends of Humanity. They had no problems killing mutants flat scan parents. Because they liked to kill the sorce of the problem. Sorry about all this bitching. But Joyce is ticking me off. Excellent job on your part. thank you for a great read.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from bradsan
Review:
oh Joyce would rather let her "babies" die then being helped by their daddy. I would understand that she would try to protect her daughters if Hank ever treated them unfair but it was all her acting as a real bitch when he became a mutant. I would also understand that she wouldn't want him to help them if he was a jerk but under these circumstances.... . I would take what was available but wouldn't leave the room while Hank was treating them so I could watch what he was doing.

Her act of calling a lawyer is rather stupid under these circumstances knowing what will happen with the Mayor on graduation. Stupid much

and Xander why would he try to take a hostile. They didn't do anything wrong yet. If he thought Buffy was in danger why did he leave the room and didn't fight then. coward much.

I can't wait how Buffy and Dawn will react. I really hope they will give Hank a chance to explain especially now she is a Mutant/Slayer. She is still the Slayer I presume and Angel would feel when she wasn't anymore. I think. Oh Joyce will get a fit when she finds out that both her children are mutants. will she both abandon them too.

Oh can't wait till your next update and I really dislike Joyce and Xander. You did good.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my... things are going to become quite difficult....
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from djhardim
Review:
I would say that Buffy was the Slayer up to the point she drowned. From what I remember about the X Gene, how a person's powers manifest when their X Gene activates depend in part on the circumstances. Buffy's X Gene powers manifested like a Slayer because that's what she needed.

I doubt this is the first time that a Slayer "died" and came back. It may be the first time that she "kept" her powers. Either she would loose them all at once, or they would gradually wane.

I imagine that Giles was surprised that Buffy was still a "Slayer" when she came back for her Junior year.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Joyce being a bitch is not really a problem as it fits the story line. Xander too. Sorry if it came across as a complaint. Not the intention. Its kind of nice to see Joyce not in the perfect mother role. She had to grow into it in the series. Plus I can see her being afraid of someone or something that is different. Sadly some people fear differences. But maybe it explains her attitude toward the slayer gig. Plus if Buffy is a Mutant was she ever really just the slayer? I think maybe not. She and Dawn seem to be far more and the reason Hank stayed away makes sense too. He was protecting his kids. I can kind of respect that.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from brokenmimir
Review:
Another interesting chapter. Normally I'm not a fan of Buffy/Angel, but this chapter actually made me think it would be interesting for this. It was Joyce that convinced Angel to leave, and with her being a bigot in this, I can picture the X-Men changing his mind, and Buffy at this point would be extremely happy if he came back. Particularly so if she has some serious upheaval from this (like developing an obvious mutation because of the transfusion). Also, with the sort of aid some of the X-Men could call in, they might even be able to fix the happiness clause.

Anyway, looking forward to more!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from grd
Review:
I hope Joyce grows up and improves in this tale. Her attitude is so bigotted and racist that makes me wonder if she were a Skrull instead of a loving mother. She sounds more like the mother of Carrie.

Love the crossover and am eager to read more. Hope this Joyce proves to be an imposter.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from AllenPitt
Review:
Yeesh, Mr. Sinister is getting involved, too? Graduation is going to be a day to remember, looks like.
Comments from author:
darn you guessed
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter. I have to say that I'm glad that I never read the newer xmen comics and only watched the tv shows. Because the FOH utterly sicken and offend me.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love it but you sure made Joyce one hell of a bitch. Xander too. Angel being afraid of blood lmao.
Comments from author:
Really I didn't think I did that much to Xander, he threatened Kitty because his friend was in danger no different than when he challenged Angelus. Also he was following Joyce's lead on there being a threat.

As for Joyce well she reminds me a lot of Iceman's mom from the first X movie, complete with "have you tried not to be a mutant/slayer" line. The only person that I know of that has made a bitchier Joyce would be Mmooch in one of his stories. Happens to be one of my favorites to.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 4 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking