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Review of chapter "Africa is no place for a toddler" from Stationary
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I like it but you should edit the dialog just a bit to sound less formal. I dont remember any of the Scoobies talking that way.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from musumenosuoh
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lol run andrew! can't wait for more!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from twlight
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Wonderful. I love how you explained how Andrew has magic and how things went so very very wrong. I love what Harry was doing to avoid a bath that is just to cute and funny. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from slmncpm
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this is a fantastic story. heh. pink hair! they need to take photos and send it to all the scoobies!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from eriktheviking
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A well done explanation for the trios slide towards the dark side.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from ChaosLady
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This is good. I can't believe I'm not tracking this!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from Althalus
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That was a nice combination between serious talk and humour. I like the way you portrayed Andrew. U look forward to seeing him learn wanded magic.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toddlers, Magic, and Baths" from Cutiepie
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That is funny. None of my children have ever NOT wanted to take a bath. I have to pull out the plug so that the tub will drain before they will get out. They all LOVE to bathe and would do so more than once a day if I were to let them. It's naps that are the huge "No, no, no," in my house (at least if you are under age 10). They just don't want to slow down for anything.
Comments from author:
I was one those kids that hated baths My mom said I would scream the whole time... but that I was fine in the shower... My niece is the same as me... hates baths... but puts herself to bed at night and shes 3... I dont have kids but I was a nanny for 7 years, and I did a lot of baby sitting... thank you for the Review ^_^
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from VillageOrchid
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Good suspense. You had us thinking Andrew was upset because his custom wand didn't work. Since Xander is related to Harry, it is also possible that he could do wand magic.
Comments from author:
hehe thank you... and No Xander wont have any magic... I'll explain why in a later chapter...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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Andrew can be such a wonderful character! You've really brought him out here. I can see him as an untrained wizard.
Comments from author:
Thank You, that chapter was really hard to write.. I did not want it to be too sappy... But I thought they way the TV show dealt with Andrew was very flat and cliche...
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, Andrew and a Magic Wand" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Good background on Andrew.
Nice touch with Xander and the pink hair.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I thought that after the Heavy stuff I needed to lighten the story back up
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toddlers, Magic, and Baths" from ChiVayne
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Great little snippet, magic and the terrible twos. Good job.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toddlers, Magic, and Baths" from eriktheviking
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Great fun happenings, a baby with active magic. A vastly overlooked part of raising baby Harry, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toddlers, Magic, and Baths" from slmncpm
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omg HAHAHAHA I LOVE IT!!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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