I also think this is worth expanding. Donna has a distinct personality that might be hard to write, but if you cna capture that, this would make a fun read, regardless of the direction you went: humor, action, romance, rom-com...
Comments from author:
I'm not great at plots, but I do agree it can be expanded. I have an idea or two that wandered across my brain this morning for a possible sequel, so I guess we'll see what happens.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Worth expanding! I think the only reasons that the Doctor didn't use some version of the chameleon arc on Donna was that he couldn't be sure what the consequences would be and didn't want to be responsible for it (i.e. psychological issues).
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm not great with plot, but I do have an idea that might work.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated