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Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from Emie
Review:
I give this a 7 cause there's only one chapter. Where's the rest of this story. I think you have something good going on here. Tell us you haven't given up yet. Update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I haven't given it up, but I had a bout of writers block, and then got a job. At the moment, it's finding a day where I'm either not at work, or when I don't have things to do after work. Fingers crossed that I can have the next chapter up by next Thursday, though. Thanks again!
Review By [Emie] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. This week's been a bit all over the place, but I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by Monday, Tuesday at latest.
Review By [aveave] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from Gideon
Review:
Intriguing start! Bad news for Buffy if Sunnydale doesn't exist here :( I can't recall anyone who used the rift to go home either so they are probably stuck there. Getting arrested in the first few minutes is not really a good start. I wonder if they will be arrested because of Buffy's underage drinking, or some other reason?
I find it difficult to believe that Buffy has never heard of or tasted Coke though. You know it comes from America right? And how come the doorman rejected her "fake" id and then let her in anyway???
Comments from author:
Ok. I'll address this in order. First, thanks for commenting!
I did think that, and I'm not too sure I want them to return home. I have to paths to chose from for this story, and I haven't quite picked which one I prefer.
She has heard of coke, but a lot of American's drink Soda. It's kind of the same, but a lot less fizzy and gassy. So it's entirely possible that she's never had coke, but cola. Besides, it's Spike - who says it's just coke :P
And finally, there are a few pubs that will let you in if you look old enough and ask because they have to. You can look a little young (I'm 22 going on 16) and they'll still let you in. I had a friend who had a fake, an obvious fake, and still got in. So...yeah.
Hope that was helpful, and thanks again for commenting! :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oh, exciting. Showing that Spike's smart, too; since he's the one who realized that they must be in another dimension. Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! XD
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from michaelangelo
Review:
Hmm so either the Doorman has an an encyclopedic memory concerning geography or BtVS is a TV show in this universe?
Comments from author:
I kind of thought that her ID would say Sunnydale of America, and that Sunnydale would be easier enough to remember, especially because it sounds rather odd (and ignoring the rather odd streets of Wales itself). But her ID would also have her birth date on it, and not only are they in the future, but she wouldn't look exactly like her college picture if she was twenty-odd, so he would assume it's fake.
Thanks for the comment. :) Hope this settled your thoughts!
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbye Hellmouth, Hello Rift!" from AllenPitt
Review:
So.... "rift" detected, and they are the ones who came through. Even worse, Spike looks just like someone Jack Harkness knows. Should be fun. Just to be sure--this is Buffy as of early season 4?
Comments from author:
Yup. Early season 4 Buffy, say just before Something Blue. Anyway, thanks for the review. :)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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