Review of chapter "Track 21 - Diamond Eyes by Shinedown" from Caflana
Review:
That was perfect! Deadpool was a lovely little addition and the dialogue was hilarious :D
Review By [Caflana] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Track 51 - Hero Of War by Rise Against" from liferscove
Review:
Well that was great, but so sad.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 51 - Hero Of War by Rise Against" from irialonso
Review:
WOW THAT WAS INTENSE ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY PERFECT REALLY GOOD JOB WOW
Comments from author:
Why thank you!
Review By [irialonso] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 51 - Hero Of War by Rise Against" from alynambered
Review:
It's been awhile, great chapter to resume with.
And Pepper's chapter was excellent, as well.
Just the one: No sounds came out of the assassins room - assassin's
Review By [alynambered] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 51 - Hero Of War by Rise Against" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So poignant, and so very believable. Well done!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from ShatteredRhapsody
Review:
I love that you get your inspiration from music. I'm the same way although I need an entire playlist to get going lol.
here's a song suggestion:
Sour Cherry by The Kills
Comments from author:
Awesome! I have a ridiculous amount of playlists to be honest. It's almost sad. I name the chapter after whichever song it was that made me suddenly see a snippet of a scene unfold in my head. It's fun.
Love The Kills! I have added Sour Cherry to the list!
Review By [ShatteredRhapsody] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from liferscove
Review:
nice work. I loved this and it was great to see Pepper being kick ass in her own way.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I really appreciate that. She's an awesome character.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Excellent!
I adore Pepper, too -- possibly even more when she's comfortably barefoot and wearing cut-off shorts and STILL totally dominating both Tony and Phil Coulson in the nicest possible way in that scene from "The Avengers", but I also deeply love Corporate Power Pepper with her spike heels and brute competence hidden behind a pleasantly freckled face. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from mackenziex
Review:
Pepper at her finest! Well done!
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from tiziano
Review:
Awww! You're so sweet! I just appreciate the chance to play in this world every once in awhile. I love this chapter too, I gotta say I wish I had her closet, especially her shoes!
Review By [tiziano] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from tammin
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That was Brilliant! That was a very subtle FU to the board, with graphs and slides. Pepper rode in like Xena and laid the smackdown like Gabrielle; the smoke rising from their poor, little heads should have set off the fire suppression system.
Thank you for the glimpse into Pepper's life.
Review By [tammin] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Track 50 - Renegade by Paramore" from irialonso
Review:
I want to be Pepper Potts when I grow up!!!
Review By [irialonso] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 49 - The Fighter by Gym Class Heroes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Track 49 - The Fighter by Gym Class Heroes" from pinkhairedharry
Review of chapter "Track 48 - Drive All Night by NEEDTOBREATHE" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I was touched by each of these three new chapters, but I was most amused by the Tony/Pepper discussion and most moved to say "Awww...!" by the sweetness of this Steve/Dawn chapter. (And of course I loved the bit about Bruce going all emo with guilt and angst over something that wasn't his fault in the first chapter, as well as being mildly tickled by the idea of ANYBODY trying to keep Thor away from Jane, especially when she's been hurt.)
Welcome back!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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