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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
Very impressive. It's always nice to see Lilah on a warpath, and this time she actually seems to have pulled it off! Thanks for the story.
Comments from author:
You're very welcome.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked! Lylah is so great in uber-alpha-bitch mode. And we all know Jethro is not going to take this lying down. I hope there will be more stories set in this time-line. Their clashes should be loads of fun.

One error. The US Navy doesn't have Colonels. They have Captains. The US Marine Corps has Colonels. Sorry to be so nit-picky.
Comments from author:
Possibly, but probably not. We'll see.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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