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Ship of the Line: An Unlikely Hope

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)KColl
Review:
That's one BIG scary-ass ship.
Comments from author:
Yes, yes it is.
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Oddshot
Review:
Ship of the Line : An Unlikely Hope by Oxnate : Why no updates for this interesting BtVS / Star Wars story you developed to answer the Challenge , Because you made so good of a start with what you wrote so far please some more soon ???, If required bribe your muse with some cookies OK .
Comments from author:
Really, it's Netflix's fault for removing SG-1 from on-demand just after I started writing this story. Get Netflix to bring back SG-1 and my muse will feel much more inspired.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from fayefree
Review:
This was fun, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
This one is unfortunately on the back burner of a very long line that got longer while I was taken up with RL. :-/
Review By [fayefree] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Oddshot
Review:
I am truly enjoying this story and hope that you update soon , I am tracking most if not all of the responses to the Ship of the Line Challenge & am find them all most interesting but also so different to each other, some one shots others with ongoing development .

Hope for more updates ASAP so I have more to read .
Comments from author:
Still working on it.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I knew I had read this before. I like the crafting you put into the rewrite. I hope you continue the story this time as I am curious how the Tollan and the Asguard will receive him. He clearly out techs the Tollans in a lot of ways, no beaming tech but that wont stop him after he captures his first snake ship. The Asguard will probably trade some tech as he is a premiere AI programmer and designer who could easily take out the replicators for them. He could really use their healing tech. It would get him out of the damn armor. Fun for all, no? Well, hope you continue it this time.
Comments from author:
Yes, SW tech is a curious mix of advanced and not-so-advanced tech. Though, everyone is so keen on getting Xander out of the armor. I like my characters to have weaknesses and depth.
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Shadowman
Review:
Different and interesting. It has been a few months since an update I hope we will see another one soon?
Comments from author:
Not soon, I'm afraid. Working on many other stories right now. Muse is a fickle beast. But I will be back.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Genuka
Review:
This is a great fic! More please!
Comments from author:
Working on other things right now. But I do have more for this.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from tomst
Review:
like the story hope you get back to it
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's an excellent challenge, but it's been... well a challenge to keep the future story balanced when facing a Ship Of the Line.
Review By [tomst] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Toras
Review:
An interesting start to a story. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this. I do have one question, once Xander has his crew and they have time to learn the technology, including the medical tech, will Xander perhaps ask the doctors about things such as cloning new lungs so he could get out of the Darth Vader suit, perhaps cloning a new arm and leg?

Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing what you do with this.
Comments from author:
Many people have brought up similar ideas. What I've come to realize is that there must have been a medical or Force related reason why a more medically advanced civilization couldn't do the same for him before.
Review By [Toras] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarthBill
Review:
Nice Firefly reference. I would have suggested having Xander send Buffy a combat droid to help with slaying.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I don't think the ship had any combat droids. Those in Ep1 had specialized control ships for them. I think the Empire preferred storm troopers. But Buffy won't go away empty handed.
Review By [DarthBill] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dargor
Review:
Interesting start. I hope this story will grow and evolve with time.
So far a lot of points that LOOK like plot holes... or adventure hooks- depends on the ways story will be going.
Definitely tracking, definitely waiting for updates, definitely thankful to author for the chapters that are already here.
Thank you!
Comments from author:
Definitely thankful for you reading and reviewing.
Review By [Dargor] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Oxnate, u no update!!!
Comments from author:
I update lots.

...

just not this one recently. I am working on it.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [18 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Oddshot
Review:
Why oh Why no new updates , Please tell your muse that there are a lot of readers waiting .

Oddshot.
Comments from author:
Sorry. When I started writing this, I didn't expect this incredible response. And, quite frankly, I had no idea where this story was going. So right now I am hashing out an outline with an actual plot instead of my usual. (just keep writing until you get stuck)

So for now I beg patience, but I promise a better story in return.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SMorgan
Review:
You now have my complete and absolute attention and now I must ask you to try and finish this and btw if you need a beta let me know ill be happy to help.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I do have more for this and I AM coming back. But my muse is working on something else at the moment and she throws a fit if I try to move her.
Review By [SMorgan] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Robby
Review:
Well, this is an interesting story.

I look forward to seeing more.
Comments from author:
I know I need to get back on this.
Review By [Robby] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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