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Review of chapter "O is for Opening" from tosca
Review:
Awesome story! I'm thoroughly enjoying this. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I hope you enjoy what's to come.
:)
Review By [tosca] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "O is for Opening" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
First, let me say I am enjoying your writing. It is very mature, and I feel like the characters are a good match for their characterizations in canon.

Second, I have to point out that the addition of a new and powerful character (Faith) to a story would, realistically, cause the canon story she is introduced into to change pretty drastically, unless you basically make that character irrelevant... in which case why did you introduce her into the story in the first place? Basically you have turned Faith into Dawn of Seasons 1-3, yeah, now the Scoobies remember her being around, but she had all the significance of being a memory rammed into an impermeable past. Basically, if you are unwilling to allow Faith to make significant changes to canon, you have made her into a BtVS Season 1 Dawn memory... and I don't think that is fair to Faith...

Anyway, will keep reading as I enjoy your characterization... and in the hope that Faith will have more of an impact than a magically-induced memory (or maybe speed bump) in this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and the compliment for my writing. I struggle with it and it was a nice comment to read about my characterisation.
Putting it that way, any powerful and new character you give to any fandom changes the fandom story lines entirely. I get that and I understand where you are coming from and I can see the similarities with the Dawn memory story arc of season 5 of Buffy. However, I just wanted to see if I could do it and I'm not taking it that seriously to be honest. I know how different the season would be if I wrote it that way. If I was doing the rest of the seasons of Teen Wolf then I'd have to do some huge revisions but I'm not. Season 1 was simple enough that I figured I could try. Teen Wolf has no vampires...so far and I haven't had Faith slay anything either.
I wanted her in a family environment and to see how she copes with both the supernatural and family life because she never had to do that like Buffy did. I love her character but I always felt there was more to her than what Buffy showed, or the horror that is the comics.
Thanks again for your comments and I really hope you enjoy what's to come.
AG
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "O is for Opening" from thewrongalice
Review:
He stayed! Excellent reaction - although now I'm wondering how Chris will react when he finds out exactly who Faith Lehane is - and can we make a really 'uneasy' meeting between Faith and Kate, nothing fatal obviously but still...how far does the story arc go? As far as Gerard? - wow what would Faith do to someone who kidnapped and tortured her favourite cousin Stiles? Thanks for updating!
Comments from author:
I'm not doing season 2. I thought about it but I wasn't a fan of season 2 as I was of season 1. However, the last chapter does mention season 2 story arcs.
Do you really think I'm not gonna have a Faith and Kate showdown? Of course I am! I'm building up to that and have made sure they don't meet until then.
And with Chris? You'll have to wait and see.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [1 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "N is for Notice" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks for updating - I liked Derek's reaction, he stays, which I always get the feeling that not enough people have stayed for Faith, and I like the Sheriff's reaction as well, that he didn't really buy the story but knew Faith and Stiles would protect each other!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [28 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from Tashio
Review:
Man...this is getting annoying. Why do you keep nerfing Faith? You make Faith look like a rookie, just for the sake rewriting the same canon scene. Where is originality in all this?

Edit: It was not that I'm not enjoying your story. I do enjoy your story. I just want to know why your keep nerfing Faith. I mean she should be able to kick that furry Alpha ass. The Alpha was nothing compared to the most, the middle, or the least bad ass that she every beat in her years of being The Second Awaken Slayer. And, when that nurse was able to club Faith on the head without Faith noticing it just made my suspense of disbelief shattered.

Also, I agree with you she not some indestructible person and the only way she able to beat some big bad was because she had support and help of other slayers and witches and some demon friends, but still she made lots of rookie mistake here. Faith change as you say, but it is hard to believe that Faith change the way she act in live or die situation. She been in that environment for a very long time and it is unbelievable that you make her sense dull.
Comments from author:
Sorry you aren't enjoying this but the premise of this story was to put Faith in S1 of Teen Wolf and try to stick to canon. If you aren't enjoying it, then don't read but thanks for letting me know.
In regards to Faith being a rookie, she's not. I'm not going to make Faith all powerful and indestructible like some writers because she's not. The story isn't about Faith kicking ass and taking names. She's changed, grown up and isn't the same as she was before in the TV show and I'm showing her what she would be like with a family to care and worry about.
Review By [Tashio] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from JulesS
Review:
Nice chapter. Interesting seeing things from Derek's point of view. I even understand some of the trouble Faith's going through with the Alpha. How many time did Buffy get thrown around by Oz the first time she tangled with his beast side? Definitely looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review!
Review By [JulesS] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from moonstarsfu
Review:
I was so happy when I saw that you had updated! Great chapter, I loved seeing Derek's POV and can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you!
:)
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from thewrongalice
Review:
Excellent! Thanks for updating - love that it's so much from Derek's POV. Hope he doesn't do something silly when he finds out Faith's a slayer!
Comments from author:
I think you'll be surprised by his reaction. It isn't good or bad, it's... instinct. That's all I'm saying on that.
Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from JulesS
Review:
I love the story. I like how you portray Faith and her interactions with Beacon Hill, while still keeping things relatively in canon. Nice trick that. I also particularly like Chapter I for Intoxicated. I just about fell out of my bed laughing so hard at what Faith was doing to Stiles. I look forward to what's coming.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I just want someone to watch Teen Wolf S1 and ask, 'Where's Faith? She needs to be there!"
Sadly the hungover scene was taken from personal experience, well, some of it was.
Thanks again for the review.
Review By [JulesS] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from moonstarsfu
Review:
This fic is ridiculously awesome! I'm so loving Faith and Derek together and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. They grow on you, don't they? lol
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from BlackBettie
Review:
Absolutely loved this chapter, and every chapter before it too, but I absolutely adore how you write the increasing feelings/tensions between Derek and Faith. Love this story so much. Eagerly awaiting for more!
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you. More will be on its way soon.
Review By [BlackBettie] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I LOVE this so MUCH
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "J is for Jealousy" from JoWinchester
Review:
Definitely the best of the small amount of TW fics on here. I'm loving that you haven't just snt Derrik & Faith straight into the relationship or that its totally typical with the big wolf going gaga over the new female, Ala Scott&Allison. It gets too boring to see it repeated in almost all the TW fics I've read lately.

I loved the banner in C1 too. Very smooth and well placed.

I can't wait for the next few chapters!
Comments from author:
I don't think Faith is the type to rush into anything and Derek is wary of every female so I figured I should draw it out.
Thank you for the review!
Review By [JoWinchester] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "H is for Heal" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
I really hope that Buffy never meets the Stiles if they find out it was her that put Faith in a coma. I think, regardless of the reasons, they'd rally around their kin which is just all sorts of nice and warm fuzzy feelings. Stiles felt very true to form in this character, of course he has in all the previous chapters too, but this was a nice insight into him and what makes him tick. Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. Stiles was fun to write. However, I'm dreading the Derek chapter.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "H is for Heal" from moonstarsfu
Review:
This story is fantastic!! I haven't really watched teen wolf but I will definitely be catching up now. I love Faith having a real family and her relationship with Stiles. I can't wait to see the relationship between her and Derek grow. Great job.
Comments from author:
You have to watch Teen Wolf. Half naked guys running around generally - what's not to like? You'll end up loving Stiles - everyone does.
Thank you for the review.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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