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Review of chapter "N is for Notice" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks for updating - I liked Derek's reaction, he stays, which I always get the feeling that not enough people have stayed for Faith, and I like the Sheriff's reaction as well, that he didn't really buy the story but knew Faith and Stiles would protect each other!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [28 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from Tashio
Review:
Man...this is getting annoying. Why do you keep nerfing Faith? You make Faith look like a rookie, just for the sake rewriting the same canon scene. Where is originality in all this?

Edit: It was not that I'm not enjoying your story. I do enjoy your story. I just want to know why your keep nerfing Faith. I mean she should be able to kick that furry Alpha ass. The Alpha was nothing compared to the most, the middle, or the least bad ass that she every beat in her years of being The Second Awaken Slayer. And, when that nurse was able to club Faith on the head without Faith noticing it just made my suspense of disbelief shattered.

Also, I agree with you she not some indestructible person and the only way she able to beat some big bad was because she had support and help of other slayers and witches and some demon friends, but still she made lots of rookie mistake here. Faith change as you say, but it is hard to believe that Faith change the way she act in live or die situation. She been in that environment for a very long time and it is unbelievable that you make her sense dull.
Comments from author:
Sorry you aren't enjoying this but the premise of this story was to put Faith in S1 of Teen Wolf and try to stick to canon. If you aren't enjoying it, then don't read but thanks for letting me know.
In regards to Faith being a rookie, she's not. I'm not going to make Faith all powerful and indestructible like some writers because she's not. The story isn't about Faith kicking ass and taking names. She's changed, grown up and isn't the same as she was before in the TV show and I'm showing her what she would be like with a family to care and worry about.
Review By [Tashio] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from JulesS
Review:
Nice chapter. Interesting seeing things from Derek's point of view. I even understand some of the trouble Faith's going through with the Alpha. How many time did Buffy get thrown around by Oz the first time she tangled with his beast side? Definitely looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review!
Review By [JulesS] • Date [28 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from moonstarsfu
Review:
I was so happy when I saw that you had updated! Great chapter, I loved seeing Derek's POV and can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you!
:)
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "M is for Mine" from thewrongalice
Review:
Excellent! Thanks for updating - love that it's so much from Derek's POV. Hope he doesn't do something silly when he finds out Faith's a slayer!
Comments from author:
I think you'll be surprised by his reaction. It isn't good or bad, it's... instinct. That's all I'm saying on that.
Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from JulesS
Review:
I love the story. I like how you portray Faith and her interactions with Beacon Hill, while still keeping things relatively in canon. Nice trick that. I also particularly like Chapter I for Intoxicated. I just about fell out of my bed laughing so hard at what Faith was doing to Stiles. I look forward to what's coming.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I just want someone to watch Teen Wolf S1 and ask, 'Where's Faith? She needs to be there!"
Sadly the hungover scene was taken from personal experience, well, some of it was.
Thanks again for the review.
Review By [JulesS] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from moonstarsfu
Review:
This fic is ridiculously awesome! I'm so loving Faith and Derek together and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. They grow on you, don't they? lol
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from BlackBettie
Review:
Absolutely loved this chapter, and every chapter before it too, but I absolutely adore how you write the increasing feelings/tensions between Derek and Faith. Love this story so much. Eagerly awaiting for more!
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you. More will be on its way soon.
Review By [BlackBettie] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "L is for Leverage" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I LOVE this so MUCH
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "J is for Jealousy" from JoWinchester
Review:
Definitely the best of the small amount of TW fics on here. I'm loving that you haven't just snt Derrik & Faith straight into the relationship or that its totally typical with the big wolf going gaga over the new female, Ala Scott&Allison. It gets too boring to see it repeated in almost all the TW fics I've read lately.

I loved the banner in C1 too. Very smooth and well placed.

I can't wait for the next few chapters!
Comments from author:
I don't think Faith is the type to rush into anything and Derek is wary of every female so I figured I should draw it out.
Thank you for the review!
Review By [JoWinchester] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "H is for Heal" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
I really hope that Buffy never meets the Stiles if they find out it was her that put Faith in a coma. I think, regardless of the reasons, they'd rally around their kin which is just all sorts of nice and warm fuzzy feelings. Stiles felt very true to form in this character, of course he has in all the previous chapters too, but this was a nice insight into him and what makes him tick. Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. Stiles was fun to write. However, I'm dreading the Derek chapter.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "H is for Heal" from moonstarsfu
Review:
This story is fantastic!! I haven't really watched teen wolf but I will definitely be catching up now. I love Faith having a real family and her relationship with Stiles. I can't wait to see the relationship between her and Derek grow. Great job.
Comments from author:
You have to watch Teen Wolf. Half naked guys running around generally - what's not to like? You'll end up loving Stiles - everyone does.
Thank you for the review.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "G is for Growl" from (Past Donor)akat
Review:
I love the interplay between Faith and Stiles/Faith and Derek; it's funny, believable, and well written. And the fact that Stiles put Catwoman down on the list things Faith could be was just plain awesome! Can't wait to see what's up next, like why the Alpha didn't kill her!
Comments from author:
I had to put Catwoman! The fact that Eliza voices her is a bonus. I wanted to do a piece of fanart which showed Stiles' piece of paper and all the crossing out he did. There would be coffee stains and doodles all over it. However, it isn't the last time we see that list, or who has it... or should I say 'finds' it.
Thanks hon for the review. As someone who hasn't watched the show yet - it's ok, I still loves you - and you like it then i'm happy.
Why do you think he didn't kill her? lol
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "G is for Growl" from (Recent Donor)TannimU
Review:
Wow this fic just continues to be so good! I actually like Faith here! She's moved beyond the I'm all sex and violence. Stiles' voice is captured so well, it's kind of scary. Are you going to start writing his character for the show!? Keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you are liking Faith as I was worried that people wouldn't take to this fic because it isn't Buffy centric and that it isn't the exact same Faith from the show. I'm glad you are liking how I write Stiles as I tend to over think his words more than anyone else's.
Thanks again for the review. Hopefully you like what's to come.
Review By [(Recent Donor)TannimU] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "G is for Growl" from thewrongalice
Review:
This is so good, love the family interaction and Faith / Derek!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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