You always start on such amazing stories or ideas and then leave me wanting more. I guess that's a good thing in its own way. Nice job with this one too! That being said, more of the buffy wookie story please!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I like the premise, but I think this story was too brief and we need to see more of the back story as well as more of the period of time after the meeting and before Dumbledore meets Harry again.
Comments from author:
sorry I have no plans for prequels at the time.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
This is stupid beyond belief. First of all it suffers from cross over pileup and author's soapbox in the worst way. Many of the various societies the the faction you present represent are inherently incompatible with one another or would know one another already. Dumbledore not knowing about guns and surviving world war two stretches disbelief to breaking when Britain was bomb especially when he's the head of the Wizard UN, and has contact throughout the wizarding global society. It also stretches disbelief to breaking that he was blindsided by any of this when he had someone living RIGHT NEXT DOOR.
And your supposed ultra manipulative Dumbledore who futzed around with magic he barely understood (when someone as old and studied as him should know multiple styles in a world where all of these exists) and then not noticing when they were torn down was retarded. Snape being uppity after the gun scene retarded. His survival instinct is too strong. Snape dismissing the child abuse they'd been telling them about retarded his grudge wouldn't run like that he's lily's kid too.
hell Dumbledore even needing to resort to his scheme if all of this exists in the world is retarded. there should be a half dozens ways to put sankeface down with harry and someone reasonably skilled with Dresden magic. That is if Voldemort could rise to power in a society with the white council.
Comments from author:
Oh I agree its stupid, which is one of the reasons I placed it under humor. I never meant for it to be taken as a serious fic and was something I pieced together during study breaks. Sorry if you were expecting me to be insulted but I actually enjoyed your review.