Loved it. Dumbles sure can't take real life to well can he? ;) By the way, who was that Death Eater? Anyone we know? ;)
Comments from author:
*vbg* Nope. I never understood the attitude of letting someone live who was trying to kill you. Does NOT compute. Sure you don't kill them in cold blood, but in self defense, they're dead if I can shoot straight. I always figured Xander was the same way.
Actually, according to show canon, Xander is the vindictive sort who WOULD kill in cold blood. So in this I think I may have toned him down. LOL
Review By [Netchka] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It's a fun story, but I dearly wish you'd just post it as chapters rather than ficlets. Hitting the "next story" link all the time instead of getting it all with "whole story" and even ficlets that show as tracked on the Latest list I tend to skip, as a couple of my favorite authors persist in perpetrating unrelated scenes as well as the stuff I actually like.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the story. Now I have to chuckle, because your mini-rant reminded me of the cartoon character George Jetson coming home from work one day and complaining to his wife Jane. "Ugh, I'm exhausted! I must have had to push that button on and off five times today." *giggle*
Seriously though, I'm sorry if it's irksome to you, but the ficlets are mostly unrelated as far as timeline and subject matter, so it makes more sense to post them separately AND for some weird reason it seems to fool my muse into letting me write more in the 'verse. *shrugs* So I'm rolling with that. Thanks for your review and I hope you keep reading. :)
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Rating [4 out of 10]
I love this series!! This new chapter is awesome. I like that Xander has a leg up now and that he has shown the Magicals exactly what will happen if they go after his family!! I hope you decide to post more and soon!!
Comments from author:
I hope so too. Thanks for the great review. *vbg*
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Loved this, April! I just finished re-reading the entire series and my smile is bigger than ever.
The idea of Hagrid, who probably weighs as much as the entire pack, combined, watching nervously as they sniff around his ankles, made me laugh out loud. ;-)
I think that Dumbledore is realizing that he's going to have even more problems, *if* Jimmy/Harry ever does come to Hogwarts, and that getting him to go there is going to be more than a matter of his simply saying it would be the best thing for Jimmy/Harry.
I'm also waiting to see what Dumbledore's reaction is going to be when Xander does finally question him about why they were unable to recognize that there was something wrong about Jimmy's/Harry's scar when they dropped him off with Xander, and why they didn't do more about it, back then. *That* should be an interesting conversation. ;-)
Comments from author:
*vbg* Thanks! I loved your reactions to the different parts and believe me, Xander and family are documenting EVERYTHING they found wrong about that whole situation. There's more I haven't put into a fic yet, maybe I ought to do that next... *lost in thought*
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
I love this series! The way you're handling the ministry and Dumbledore is great! I liked Giles little cameo at the end too. I look forward to the next installment of the series.
Comments from author:
So do I! The muse surprised me with this one and I hope I get another sometime soon. *vbg*
Thanks for the review! :)
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Lol perfect pets for a boy to have, it's a shame It's not on the list of acceptable pets for 1st years even if hyenas have cat like attributes. XD. I can see this as something that dumbles will use to say Harry needs safer caretakers. I can't wait to see how Harry is personality wise when he wasn't raised under such neglectful conditions.
Is there anyway Jesse could end up joining jimmy at magic school? I always wondered if Dudley was raised differently if he could have his own magic uncovered since it does show up in families sometimes, like with the creevy brothers. Having support at the school could make a world of difference and while I like Ron he makes a sucky support friend. Not to say he cant be but he has too many of his own issues that he would have to work through first.
Comments from author:
*snicker* Um, I have a feeling that if Dumbledore wants Harry/Jimmy to go to Hogwarts, some concessions will have to be made. As part of Xander's Pack, he MUST be protected and by that time, who knows, the boy may have even MORE protectors. *giggle*
Hm, you know what, I'm glad you brought that up. I think I'm gonna have to work on Ron, he can't be allowed to be a sucky support friend. Nope, nosirree!
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated