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Review of chapter "1: Gotham City" from raxadian
Review:
I guess Batman will have trouble to believe her.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Sewers of Love" from raxadian
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The shadow of the bat, uh? Well he got brains...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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I've spent the last couple of days reading this story, and its sequel, and I like them a lot. I just have one question: What happened to Dawn? As far as I can tell, she hasn't even been mentioned, though there have been mentions of incidents that she was deep in the middle of, such as the fight against Glory.
Comments from author:
That is on purpose. According to Wikipedia, Dawn is in Rome in college, and since she is out of college, I have left her there. I never liked her character. In fact, I hated her, so I only acknowledge her existence, and then leave her out. Due to my extreme dislike of Dawn, I would not be inclinded to write her respectively, and she is of absolutely no use to me at all, so I don't bother with her. If you like her character, then I am sorry, but I just would not be able to make myself write her decently. I didn't like Kennedy either, but she served a purpose to me at one point in the story.
Also, I wanted to say thank you for reading my story and I am glad you liked it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from (Current Donor)Listener
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This story kept me reading, which is a big compliment, as I have very little patience for long fics that don't pay off early on.

However, the pregnancy trope, the love-at-first-sight trope, and the magical black person trope (Dick Grayson, while Romany, still fits) all were a bit annoying.

One other thought: I did NOT buy your Bruce/Batman as the Nolanverse version. He really felt more like the Kilmer version -- now, I didn't mind that version, but I think I had unrealistic expectations because you said Nolanverse and I just didn't get that feel from it.

Still, I'm looking forward to your sequel. Good job on the plot and storyline.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from serenityselena
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a great story with many interesting twists ^_^

P.S.here are my suggestions for the Romanian words - did you use an online translator for them? unfortunately what you got was not the meaning you were looking for (as it sometimes happens in this situation)
“lying bitch” = “căţea mincinoasă”
“The deceiver always ends up being deceived” =“înşelătorul întotdeauna ajunge să fie cel înşelat ”
with “Cuji” did you mean “Cluj”?
Comments from author:
Those weren't Romanian. They were Turkish. I read somewhere that Romani Gypsies don't speak Romanian because it is the romanticised language of Romania. They either speak their clains Gypsy-Romani or another language. So, I picked Turkish.

And yes, I did. I will fix that.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from bradsan
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very good written and easy to read. well done and a good story love it.

Only complain I have but that's just me. I thought that Buffy would fight in the end and I love Faith but it was not what I expected. That's because the blind woman in Paris told Buffy she couldn't do it without Batman. So Faith fighting instead of Buffy was a little confusing because or that.

I don't miss Dawn because she is to self centric and the same goes for Xander he is also to childish and I didn't liked him so much after the second season. when he lied to Buffy.

Why didn't they bound Kennedy's power or take it away or keep her in a cell she couldn't escape from because it is sealed with magic that will hold her.

Can't wait what will happen in the sequel,.
Comments from author:
I have plans for Kennedy. That is why she is not bound somewhere. I hated Dawn. Xander is just mainly for cmoic relief when it is needed. And, *SPOILER ALERT*, the Insurrection that the old woman told Buffy about in Paris, hasn't happened yet. What happened in the first story, wasn't it.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from gracerealized
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This is SO good I just wanted to keep reading and keep reading and then the darn story went and stopped on me! :)

Love their relationship, can't wait to meet the new addition and I adore Richard and how you're writing him. YAY!

Tell mom to proof faster, your adoring public awaits ...impatiently! ;)
Thank you for the fun read!
Gracie
Review By [gracerealized] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from HMaxMarius
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I like!!!

More! More!!!


Just so long as Kennedy NEVER utters the words "Mistah J" or "Puddin" =P.

hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: About Time" from VillageOrchid
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Hmmm. Was a little unsure about what had happened to Kennedy. But I do think that David Tennant had been considered at one time to play the Riddler... so that was kind of fun to imagine.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "27: Heart of a Warrior" from VillageOrchid
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'I hear Bora-bora is nice this time of year.'
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "24: Riddles in the Dark" from VillageOrchid
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Your version of Dick is a match made for Luna Lovegood. A bit god in the machine for me, but the story is well dramatized.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "23: Group Therapy Session -- Popping Bubble Wrap" from VillageOrchid
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I am beginning to think that the king of the vengeance deamons might be the one who could save Willow and the others and prevent the hellmouth.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "22: Regret Malfunction" from VillageOrchid
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You've been under-using Xander. Now is the time for him to give them both a DVD of "Undercover Blues." Bruce may not yet it yet - except as future planning, but maybe it will work for Buffy. After all death is her gift, and there's a character in there called el morte.

(just a suggestion. i know you've already written the whole thing).
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21: The Things You Learn" from VillageOrchid
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I keep thinking to the words that go with the dagger or prophesy about Vengeance. Maybe they should be "researching" or asking about vengeance demons.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20: Homecoming" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay some how they figured out how to fight the first evil without activating all of the potentials... and Dawn doesn't seem to exist at the moment.
Comments from author:
I hated Dawn and quite frankly I found no use for her in the story. They have enough to worry about without her whining, getting the way, and causing trouble. According to Wiki she is in Rome. She went to school there and remained there afterwards. And Xander will get used in the next story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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