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Review of chapter "A Cry For Help" from draconis
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I couldn't help it...when I saw this part, I immediately added in my mind this reference to Inspector Clouseau's "Cato" to Buffy's response. It just seemed like the natural Muggle reference Buffy would inject here.


"...The next stage is for you to try it unprepared.” He told her as he began clearing away the broken chairs that he had fallen into.

“Great, so you're gonna be stalking me all day so that you can ambush me when I least expect it?”

“Something like that.” He said with a small smile, and he looked as if he was going to enjoy the opportunity to catch her off guard.

“Great! Now I've got my very own Cato." She huffed with some sarcasm, the latter part under her breath.
Review By [draconis] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Their Revenge" from DenSorteEngel
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Sorry, but I'm confused... So many stories, some are sequels, some are prequels, none of them are finished - so... what am I supposed to read first? The Story? Or the sequel or the so-called Prequel? Or?
And pleaaase be carefull that you don't use Buffy as a Know/Guess/Fix-it-all in every situation, you have done that (a bit) in the past, please be carefull as it might ruin the storyline otherwise. HOWEVER - I like your twists and turns in the story and still enjoy reading on, and can't wait for more chapters :)
Comments from author:
Hi, it's always good to hear from new readers and get some new input. Thanks for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

The only story that isn't complete in the series is Lost, the rest are all finished and I won't be adding any more to them. I'm currently working on the next part of the series though so there will be another part coming.

I know the ordering can be a little confusing but they are ordered correctly on the Lost & Found Series page. Lost is the first story, followed by Found and then The Return. This is the order in which the events happen. The confusing part is that anyone new to the series might not understand Lost, which is why in the first chapter of that story I recommend that new readers skip it and come back to it later (although they don't have to of course.) I hope that clears it up for you.

As for Buffy fixing every situation... Well personally I don't think that she does. There are plenty of moments during the entire series where she doesn't manage to help out or automatically save the day. In this story alone, Barty Jr still escapes from her, Harry still runs off to the Ministry and Sirius still (supposedly) dies etc.
Even though Buffy has a big part to play in the series, and definitely in the coming battles, ultimately it has to be Harry who saves the day. That won't ever change, not in my stories at least.

Thanks again for the review :)
Review By [DenSorteEngel] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Their Revenge" from maxthehobbit
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Looks like a major set up for the next part of the series. Black is with Dawn and Willow and maybe Voldemort knows where Black is, which means he has his bargaining chip, but will he use Black or Dawn, or both. Delores deserves much more than what she got. And now the Ministry knows about Buffy being the slayer, she's going to have plenty of problems.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you so much for this and for all of your reviews! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story and are looking forward to more.

Yes the last couple of chapters were mainly just to set the scene in the next part, but I didn't want to end it on a really sad and kinda emotional chapter. So yeah, lots more to come and plenty more problems for Buffy coming up soon! Thanks again :)
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Little Inspiration..." from maxthehobbit
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Hmm this Minister needs to be eliminated asap. Miss Pink also needs to be bitch slapped till she's out cold. I think this Minister guy could actually be working for Voldemort, at least that's what it looks like right now.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just The Beginning" from maxthehobbit
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I like this series, I think it is the first time Buffy has been a sibling to Remus, most of the time he is her love interest. I like your style of writing, easy to read without $10 dollar words from a thesaurus and it flows like a slow moving stream. The three tests were good. My only critique would be that I thought Buffy would work more with Harry although he has to be the one to end it all, it's his destiny. She I guess has already finished her destiny. I'm looking forward to what will happen when Buffy finally gets into it with the Ministry.

Good job writing this.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Their Revenge" from AbigaelRose
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an interesting way to end this story, and a bit vague. I did enjoy the entire story, well barring Sirius's murder. Good show!
-Abby
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Their Revenge" from DavidBMorris
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Fear of one to many crosses
With the world of Rowling and Joss'

Made me pass on this story often
Keep it locked up in a coffin.

Then I read a chapter, and then another
I learned that Buffy had a brother.

Saw the two world's intersect
In a way that made me connect.

I've written a Harry crossover or two
ANd I could take a lesson from you.

Making old Severus a bit less surly
Revealing his good side a bit early

Creating a couple of love triangles
Always good for a romantic tangle

And now as we enter the end of the story.
It seems the two worlds will collide, oh glotry

This story I'll gladly reccommenD
TO enemies as well as friends

A story like this deserves a sequel.
Write one fast, they need an equal.
Comments from author:
Hehe thank you for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I loved the rhyme too :)
Review By [DavidBMorris] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loosing Grip" from AbigaelRose
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You killed Sirius! With tall the subtle hints of of a shipper and saving him from Azkaban in the first place you killed him! Okay done with my little melt down now. This chapter was perfectly executed, containing the raw emotion and action that the story called for. The Voldy V. Buffy showdown was brilliantly depicted with a combination of seething anger and mutual awe between the opponents. I hope to hear more soonish.
-Abby Rose.
Comments from author:
Ah yeah, I'm sorry about that :(. I hated writing that part since I love Sirius' character, but it had to be done for the story (or at least the next part of the story) to progress in the way I wanted it to.

Don't get too upset just yet though, I can almost guarantee that you will like chapter 39 when it comes out ;). Thank you so much for the kind words, I definitely think this is one of my best chapters so far and I'm so happy that everyone has liked it :). Chapter 38 is now up!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loosing Grip" from ChikaraKatherine
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Well this was eventful. All hell broke lose and Bella got a beatting laid on her. A bad beating that might just leave her more damaged than before. Excellent. Vicious harpie has had that beating coming for a long, long time. Frank and Alice say thank you. It looks as if old Tommy boy is in for more of a fight than he thought. Good. This had good balance was a little short, but very good. I don't honestly think Buffy would feel bad about beating the holy hell out of vicious harpie. Buffy's been around long enough to know threats when she sees them. Amy's body stealing mother for one. Certainly wasn't good for anyone, the fact she got blown up with the Mayor still makes me smile. Odd how Buffy's orb didn't break. I expcet some kind of twist with that. Buffy has been fighting a war longer than most. Just happends that the war changed places. I understand her wanting to keep her past idenity quite. But honestly far too many people know it. Its just one of those things that seems like its far too well known. That its going to bite her in the ass sometime sooner than later. Still this was very good and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Comments from author:
Hehe thank you, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it :). I think Bellatrix more than deserved what came her way, and she'll be paying for it for a long time to come. Thanks again :)
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loosing Grip" from spikesplayfulpet
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This was another great chapter. I know u were nervous about it, but the fight scenes were great and it ran really smoothly. I was pleasantly surprised that you actually did send sirius through the veil. I know that is what happens in the book, but alot of the stories I have read save him somehow. So, kudos to you for writing it that way and I like how it was buffy who got to kick belltrix's butt. Keep up the great writing and I will be awaiting your next update.
Comments from author:
Thank you, that means lot to me. I really do hate writing fight scenes, I think I tend to rush through them because they are supposed to be fast and action-y... But that doesn't ever help. I made sure with this one to take a step back read it through slowly while editing, and it must have helped.

I'm glad you liked the part with Bellatrix. I think it's about time she got what she deserved. Thanks again :).
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Rescue" from ChaosLady
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Reckless, reckless boy. Excellent update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home" from spikesplayfulpet
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Another great chapter. I loved seeing umbridge getting knocked on her butt. Its about time :) I cant wait to see what you have planned for the ministry battle, I'm sure it will be great. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "To The Rescue" from ShalaDakiri
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Harry needs a smack upside the head for this. He has a teacher he trusted and respected--and who is just as emotionally involved--telling him to wait and confirm the truth and he still runs off half-cocked.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Change Is Not Always Good" from ChaosLady
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That went a little fast!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Change Is Not Always Good" from Starfox
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I hope this is one of those fics where Umbridge is slain for torturing kids and sending Demons after innocents.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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