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Review of chapter "At the Mansion" from Harry
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Buffy is going to enjoy being with these vampires. Seto, Joey, and Yami will take good care of her. They see themselves as her Big Brothers, and anyone who wants to mess with her, is going to have to deal with them. Those SCUM at that club are going to find themselves in BIG TROUBLE!
Comments from author:
I agree wholeheartedly with you on that one there. And, what with the three vampire heroes being what they are, Yami, Joey and Kaiba sure have a sense of justice in what they do, too. :)

Thanks for your nice feedback. It means a lot to me, and also encourages me to write more, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rescued... by Vampires" from bradsan
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Yesss more please.

Really good.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rescued... by Vampires" from Harry
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Well, Buffy got out of that mess in one piece. And as for the scum who did it, well, just be grateful that Yami is the honorable being that he is. Otherwise, not only would this bum be drained, he would be TURNED to serve the trio! And I see three vampires with a sense of justice who are going to do their part to make sure that Buffy not only gets someplace safe to rest for the rest of the night, but also, help to get off the streets. And if ANYONE messes with her after she gets off the streets, and threatens her, I see her three guardians coming back for a visit! A visit that will make this person think TWICE about harming Buffy!
Comments from author:
I couldn't agree more there, of course. And I think I might make it so that the gang leader who tried to hurt Buffy ends up as one of the servants living at the mansion.

Thanks for the awesome feedback. That means a lot to me, and encourages me to write more. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fateful Night" from Harry
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Well, now we know how Buffy ended up on the streets. But something tells me that before long, someone is going to try something, resulting in a attack by the trio. And who knows: She may have found some people who can help her get off the streets and get a life. If not, she might join them as a member of the family looking for criminals who hurt others.
Comments from author:
I agree. And thanks for the nice feedback as well. It means a lot to me, and encourages me to keep writing, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fateful Beginning" from Harry
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Yes, Yes, YES! Not only do I get to read and review a new story of yours, but I get MENTIONED in it as well! Now, for Buffy, I see her with heels, fishnet stockings, a short skirt and a pesant blouse, her hair teased out. But that will change once her Guardians (Joey, Yami, and Seto) meet up with her and take a shine/pity on her. They will either bring her to them as one of their own, or they will do what they can to help her get off the streets and into a nice paying job. And if ANYONE tires to harm her, well, you do NOT want these three guardians on your case! Best to treat this young lady with respect, and that way, you get to keep on living.
Comments from author:
Glad you like this so far, too. :) And I can also see something like either of those two things happening to Buffy after she gets rescued, too.

Thanks for the nice feedback. It sure does help me to write more as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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