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Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from bradsan
Review:
Have pity because I'm new to this kind of crossovers. If I get it right.

Buffy's souls is split between her human body and the body/shell she wears now. Am I right. that's why she came back different because her soul wasn't whole.

Or is Buffy dead but her body doesn't die because of her soul that is stuck to that human body. So she is stuck in the human world and can't cross over because of her soul.

Hope you'll take your time to explain.
Comments from author:
It's sort of like your second guess. (So good job there!) Basically, Willow's resurrection spell had some unintended side effects/consequences for Buffy. (Because when has one of Willow's spells worked the way that she intended it to?)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from weap
Review:
but how can Willow be Miyuri o_O????
Why is there no chapter 2 ( *A*)
and what happens to Buffy when she is free O_O?
Comments from author:
But Willow and Mayuri have so much in common!

The story is only one chapter long because that's all that I needed to fulfill the wishlist fic request. ^_~ If I ever wrote a sequel, I'd probably tackle that very question.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [weap] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from AlphaBeta
Review:
I would not mind at all if you continued this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from Zari
Review:
Nicely done. Faith was perfect here. I love how she was on Soifon's side and the subtle connection between them. Even better, I love how she and Buffy were very sisterly here. Love each other to death (quite literally). Not to mention the undercurrent of who (and what) Slayers really are, how they stand in the grand scheme of things.

Willow as Mayuri... *snicker*

I wonder what happened to Xander. Nemu? Did Willow imprison him? Someone else? I could see him as Ukitake were it not for the timeline issue. Ichigo as well. Perhaps Ichigo is him reborn then?

My one nitpick is Yoroichi, which I'm pretty sure should be spelled Yoruichi. Yoru = night, ichi = one. So "one night".
Comments from author:
If I wrote a Xander fic, I don't think I'd write him as Nemu, Ukitake, or Ichigo. Well... Ukitake, maybe.

You're probably right about how to spell Yoruichi. ^_^

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Zari] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from dawnkey
Review:
A interesting one-shot are you possibly considering adding more to it as it would be interesting to see who the other BTVS characters are as Xander would be perfect as a Ikkaku Madarame who had accepted all aspect's of his possessions along with Dawn as Nemu Kurotsuchi as I can see Willows doing that to her considering her actions during season 6 to dawn such as trying to rip her up while spike would be perfect as Yasochika Iemura as Spike was all ways trying to act cooler than he is as is Yasochika Iemura who continually is shown trying to act the epitome of cool while Gile's would be perfect as Chōjirō Sasakibe as they both have a deep love of English style Tea
Comments from author:
Thanks! I honestly hadn't considered adding more to this fic. It's done. But! You have a lot of awesome ideas. Have you considered writing any Buffy/Bleach fics? Anyway! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Review By [dawnkey] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from brokenmimir
Review:
Very Interesting! I like Soi Fon having someone in her corner, and the relationship between Buffy and Faith was great. Urahara is my favorite character from Bleach, so seeing him cornered like that was fun. Nice little fic.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I like Soi Fon and I *love* Urahara! So this was a fun fic to write. And I'm glad that the Buffy and Faith bits worked for you. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from tomfo
Review:
This was a great fic, but it really leaves more questions asked than answered. Would love to see more Buffy/Bleach from you.
Comments from author:
Thanks! It's true, the fic takes place in the middle of the story. It's (sometimes) a thing of mine? Awww... thanks! And thank *you* for reading and reviewing!
Review By [tomfo] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unfinished Business" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Interesting and clever twist to Buffy and Faith being in the Bleach Universe. You got their voices and attitudes down good.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I worried about that when I was writing this piece, especially since this was my first (and only) attempt at writing Faith. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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