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Review of chapter "Baseline Answers" from docfeng
Review:
would like too see a end to this story and more in the series
Review By [docfeng] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baseline Answers" from karambura
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I really like this series and hope you will write more in it. I never watched NCIS but I still find this story very interesting and easy to follow. Please update it soon.
Review By [karambura] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baseline Answers" from docfeng
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more please
Review By [docfeng] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Blood King" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I really loved this line:

Sorry,” Wesley replied cooly. “You haven't killed enough people for a glare like that to bother me.” Lilah chuckled at that, and also seemed completely unfazed.

(by the way, you know you can edit chapters once they're up right? You don't have to upload the whole chapter again... you can just select edit story from the chapter in question.)
Comments from author:
I know.
And thanks. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Blood King" from SuukiAldrea
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This is an awesome story! I saw this one, read the first one, then read this one. It's sooo cool!!! Update soon please! Ja ne!
Review By [SuukiAldrea] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Blood King" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Our Case, Agent Gibbs" from AllenPitt
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Crossovers with Bones & Castle would be interesting. Maybe Booth is a descendant of Angel's? While Castle... looks just like Caleb. That could get awkward.
Wesley & Lilah are going to have a hard time as immortals, their faces are in too many databases. Changing name & moving to a different country doesn't work anymore, what with global communications & facial recognition & stuff. Too bad Immortals aren't like Doctor Who (regenerating into a new face periodically). I suppose they can use magic, though.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure that will be an issue any time soon - I don't intend to have the story move centuries (or even decades) ahead of time any time soon.

But yes, Bones and Castle are on the list of possible crosses
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Our Case, Agent Gibbs" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Our Case, Agent Gibbs" from MagnusXXN
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Liked the shot about Giles's boat. God, does that man love his boat. Its kinda weird. Though I think him and Xander would bound over their love of carpentary. When you put all the facts down about Wesley, it does make you question alot of things. More people don't help out someone who ties them to a chair for the not fun torture.

Don't know I gave you anything you couldn't pick up on wikipeida.

It will be interesting to see how this whole thing plays out. What aspects have you got going on around the time of the story? Is Tony already doing secret agent stuff for the director? Has the CIA and 'The Frog', shown up yet? Will they soon, or at all? Will Wesley found Abby curious, or just in poor taste?

Update soon. Can't wait to found out.



): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from Vickzie
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Briliant start the story! Please update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from AbscondingCascade
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Oh this is going to be Fun, in thanks a poem ~ http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/141.html
Comments from author:
Gracias for the review! Glad you liked it.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from AllenPitt
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Are you planning on doing crossovers with various 'crime' shows? Just curious. Imagine "Bones" & Wesley meeting Booth. Response to Ziva's queries on IWC should be interesting. Probably on the lines of "stop asking, right now".
Does the Watchers Council have any relationship with the watchers who follow Immortals around?
Comments from author:
I am planning on a few possible other 'crime show' crossovers. Possibles include: Burn Notice, White Collar, Bones, Castle.

And no. The two kinds of Watchers do not know the other exists. Immortal Watchers know that the supernatural exists - a loose tangential understanding - and Slayer Watchers know Immortals exist - a slightly better understanding. But they don't know about eachother.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from Guardian
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Looks like a good start for the sequel here.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Review By [Guardian] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from Oxnate
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I think you did the 'add sequel' wrong. I didn't get an announcement that this had been posted.

EDIT: Which is what you did wrong. You need to create the series first and then add this to it so that your readers can be notified.
Comments from author:
There was no Series up until I put this story up.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The IW What?" from RHatch
Review:
good beginning chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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