Good. I have a question about Xander's necklace though. Is there a reason why Willow couldn't directly empower him?
Comments from author:
I guess the spell works a little like a Supernatural hex bag, it can't be put on a person like one of those anti-possession tattoos, it has to be physically worn.
Thanks for the review.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Good work with the pulp stereotypes! Good flow and great characterization. All around, this tale shows all the promise of an enduring epic if you find some good underlying theme besides the journey home. Several pulp heroes had extended lifespans, combiningthese would allow them a lot of free play.
Comments from author:
There's more pulp heroes to come!
Thanks for the review.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Xander's take on how to deal with the 'altering the past' issue is interesting, and quite reasonable... in a world without branching tmelines. 'Alternate/Vampire Willow' would indicate that their world Does have them (before even getting into the mess that is the marvel-verse etc.) Though, and in a world with branching timelines, just Being there creates a split, so they can do whatever they want without affecting their past, and getting back to Their present/future will need them to go sideways as well as forward no matter what they do. The joys of time travel, hey?
Comments from author:
Yep, Faith mouth dun wrote a cheque the Scoobies might not wish to cash.
Time travel is complicated, figuring out all the ripples from an action.
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Chargone] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated