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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from jharz
I really enjoyed this story so far, please keep up the good work.
Review By [jharz] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from batzulger
Interesting crossover. How long after 'Doctor Horrible' does this take place in Billy's timeline?
Comments from author:
For Billy, it's been a couple of years... Basically long enough for Moist to get frustrated and leave, and for him to bottom out, emotionally speaking. :)

I know I didn't write it in, but that's what I was thinking. Thank you for reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from IrFane
Good so far. Got me looking a bit for more dr. horrible fics.
Comments from author:
Thank you. There are a few really good ones out there, but they're hard to find. If you're ever on AO3, the author Entangled Now has a bunch of good ones. :)
Review By [IrFane] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from tydepul
way to keep at it. nice update.

the plot is proceeding pretty interestingly, and the pace of the story has been good. i like how you're balancing btvs plot elements with billy's new life. there's a fairly clear view of what billy's encountering and dealing with at school and on the homefront. though i feel like things are glossed over a little bit, in regards to billy's motivations for acting and reacting to the situations. like going to the bronze, or tutoring the cordettes, if he really didn't want to do these things, why would he feel obligated to do them anyways? just comments from the peanut gallery.

good luck with the writing!
Comments from author:
I actually intend to make a point of it in the coming chapter... Sadly not finished as the past couple days have been kinda ugh on the home front... But he actually has a reason for these things... And it's part of the same reason he's helping the Scoobies. :)

Thanks for reviewing. It warms my heart to see people enjoying my work.
Review By [tydepul] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tydepul
Wow, the crossover of these two universes sounds really interesting. Unusual story you've got so far, but it is compelling. I'm curious where Billy will go with this new life.
Comments from author:
I like to think that he'll go very far. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [tydepul] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Intriguing start, with good solid characterization of Billy I'm trying to figure our where this is in the Buffyverse timeline. Will young Dr. Horrible join the Scoobies? Stay Tuned!!!
Comments from author:
Whoops, I should have said that, huh? Year One, as in, Season One, lol. Thanks for the review! I intend to post more tomorrow! Next chapter will have exactly where in the timeline it is.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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