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Review of chapter "chapter 20" from Mcspender
Review:
So both Andorra and Willow returned thanks to being related to the Oldies one?. Nice, and kinda opens the door for other histories!.
I really liked the Andorra vs Ilirya fight, veery cool!.
Cool series dude, congratulations =)!.
See ya!!.
PS: Merry Christmas to you too dude
=)
Comments from author:
Thanks Man. Now the Predators have something to hunt that is worthy of their skills. Of course the Old Ones on the Big Playground may hunt them back. Dora the explorer and Buffy are in the can. Gonna see what I can mess with next.

See Ya!

PS: Merry Christmas!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 20" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing method of ending a great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Endings are hard. You never tie up all the loose ends and you never know if you hit the right tone or not. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 20" from DarthTenebrus
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Bravo, sir. It could have been longer, more in-depth, but this is a good strong finish for a good story. Too bad there was no cameo appearance by Cthulhu, or any of the other Great Old Ones, that would have gotten a standing ovation.

Well Done Sir.

PS: Got a Star Wars series going, just none of the Star Wars characters or the Star Wars verse but definitely some Star Wars elements, like for example Dawn and Willow turning to the Dark Side and wiping out the Slayers, then plotting a global power grab, check it out if you like, even got some fanart there..
Comments from author:
Thank You! I was temped to stretch this out to thirty chapters or more but a while back I got suckered into spending two years writing "The Slayers of Dune" series. I get gun shy with anything over twenty chapters. It would have been fun to have Cthulhu rise out of the arctic ocean just before Mesektet blasted the place to hell. Ah well. Gonna see what I'm going to write next. I think I have an old Buffy/Star Trek outline somewhere around here.

Merry Christmas!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 19" from DarthTenebrus
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What? That's it?! Huge chunks of the Earth burn and there's not evenhanded death toll? @

There must be something coming...


Cthulhu....?
Comments from author:
Not much of a death toll since the arctic was hit.. Perhaps a few burned fishing boats. However I can't guarantee the weather patterns aren't gonna be pretty messed up.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 19" from Mcspender
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Wow, Willow's back, how did that happened?. The magical energies were strong to bring her back via Hive's power?.
Ah, nothing like the primal power of the Sun to ruin the oldies one day, ooh yeah!.
By the way, I think one of the WR &H science guys read EE Smith "Lensman" series and got the inspiration to use the sunbeam. It's like they say, Nothing beat the classics xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yep, the classics are the best. Nothing shines like the sun. Willow will be addressed next chapter but everything is there in chapter 19.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from Mcspender
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Naa, this time, I don't think a big BOOM is the answer.
This time, I think the magical equivalent of a well placed .50 cal. bullet is gonna do the trick.
Better place your shot right on target Buffy, place it right.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
That my friend is why it takes billions of computers weaving a spell of razor sharp precision. Think of it as burning a tick off a dog...from Mars.


Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from DarthTenebrus
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Shit, what is the Buffmeister becoming?

And just what is Messiah, that it can essentially cremate everything from the North Pole to the 80th Parallel in only the space of a few hours?

The Old Ones are rising now, may the Bright Lady protect our defenders ....
Comments from author:
“Of course, I would be more concerned about pushing the Earth out of orbit. We are dealing with some hellish energies here.” Yeah, we're pulling out the big guns here.

See ya!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 17" from Mcspender
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Rest in peace Andorra, may you have good game in the great hunting ground of the After life =(.
Son, it's time for the End game, let's see how do they stop the Big M... wonder who will in a fight: Chutluhu or Godzilla??.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Chutluhu of course. Don't be so eager for the end yet. More surprises to come.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 17" from DarthTenebrus
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Ohhhhhhhh shit.....

Now that's more like it! The perfect buildup to a perfect cliffhanger ending to this chapter...you've done your homework!

And to throw a dog a bone, as it were, Angel becomes a reluctant villian, boy is he gonna hate himself later for this....but there are times, and circumstances, where villians end up becoming the most unlikely heroes. Just take Vegeta or Darth Vader, as examples of what I mean...

Well done so far, keep that level of tension and anxiety built up for as long as you can! Just be careful you don't keep it built up for too long or people get used to it, basic psychology...
Comments from author:
Thanks! It took me a while to get a grip in the story. Hang on tight. It's going to be a bumpy ride. : )
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 16" from Mcspender
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Ah, nothing like a snow day in hell to help form a bond with friends, and hurt some deadly enemies.
Fun in the snow, heell yeah!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Good times for Thelma and Louise. Too bad global warming has melted half of the polar caps. : )

More fun ahead.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from Mcspender
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Cordelia, I truly never understood why such an arrogant person is so beloved in the Fandom, I know she had a loot of growing up as a character later, but weell, to each her own I guess.
At least Ilirya teach her a lesson and feed her a nicee knuckle sandwich xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Boobs! Cordelia has boobs! Everybody loves boobs. : )
The Children of the Shadow are no joke. Clearly, they are ready to take on the Powers That Be.

Gonna blow up more stuff soon. Happy Thanksgiving!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from DarthTenebrus
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Ahh, revelations are wonderful things...

Cordelia...is Messiah.

Still....sigh....too soon, too sudden, had they no hints, no clues to piece together? Revealing her identity to the readership before the good guys can figure it out for themselves kinda ruins the surprise and disinterests the readers. Basically, it kills the terror of the thing before the moment can strike in all its mind numbing glory.

And also remember the Xenomorphs, they have the innate ability to be all over that ass before the victims has a chance to form a rational thought. These monsters represent primal unthinking terror, the nameless dread that keeps children afraid of the dark. You turn your head, slowly, and IT IS ALREADY UPON YOU!!!

The Predator represents the unknown threat of an advanced belligerent culture whose sole focus is hunting human prey, and it has a vast array of incomprehensible apparatus with which it can carry out the ghastly deed; you could be killed without ever knowing your enemy. One instant you're alive and the next you're ...not.

When these two terrible adversaries combine with the supernatural world, does humanity really stand a chance of beating back the tides of death and destruction, or are we basically buggered?
Comments from author:
Not quite. She is one of the Powers That Be but she's not the big guy. Messiah still sleeps in the cold waste of Kadath.
But she is a snob.

PS: Totally agree. Both the Alien and the Predator are bad asses. But there are things in the dark that are worst than them. A direct confrontation between the Great Old Ones and The Powers That Be would reduce the Earth to a smoking hole in space. Alien,Predator,Old Ones,PTB's nobody get's a turkey leg for Thanksgiving.

Good thing we've got little miss "I am the law" Summers to keep the slackers in line.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 14" from Mcspender
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Damn, poor Willow =(.
And off to the Pole the gals go, to kick Unicron's younger brother butt. Good luck girls, you're gonna need it.
One question, do the Yaujta drink their beer cold or warm?. Curious minds want to know xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
Cold my man. Beer is always best cold. : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Sometimes a chapter is filled with fluff, sometimes there's a good side plot, and sometimes, just sometimes, there comes along a chapter that grabs hold and does not let go...the latter would certainly deem the case with this latest addition to the story...

And yes, I caught the references to characters from "Aliens", LT Gorman and Warrant Officer Ripley working shamanistic magicks? They seemed the type to kill first and to hell with the spells...that is to say if Gorman didn't choke this time like he did in the APC on LV426, friggin cherry LT...

So did that take us one mile or several with the capture and rendition of Messy Mesektet? Loved the terror in her true form, whatever that was.

PS: At least there was some humanity in Gwen, as she could still feel the influence of the Voice as that Reverend Mother was trying to use it on...who exactly? How would Messy have fared against.a Kwisatz Haderach? That poor Rrverend Momma...
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it. Just thought I'd throw in some "easter eggs" for the hardcore. Mesektet is very important when it comes to dealing with Messiah. For now Buffy and Andorra are going on a very weird and terrifying road trip.

See ya!

PS: I think a Kwisatz Haderach in it's true form could take Mesektet. See "The Prince of Arrakis"
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Mcspender
Review:
Though I walk through the valley of death, I will fear no evil cosmic brats, because I have a an electrifying lady, lots of Dakka, Close Air Support and a Killer Satellite with me xD!!!.
Cool battle, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
You know most supernatural beings aren't so scary if you can get your hands on a 500 terawatt laser and a gang of mercenaries with there own gunships. : )
Up next Buffy and Andorra hit the road in a really weird buddy movie. Think Thelma and Louise and the fiery swirling vortex of death.

Good times!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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