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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from DieselDriver
Review:
And it works out just fine reading this after the other story. It wasn't so important to interrupt the other story with after all. My only question, which will be answered by me just continuing to read (which I am certainly going to do) is; will you tell us about Cole and Dru's visits to the scooby gang next? or Soon? (ok, that's sort of one question, sort of two, balance you know...)
Comments from author:
Well... no. Not soon. But eventually, yes.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, first time I've noticed this type of quickie typo error:

"your black and red" Should be "you're black and red" a contraction of "you" and "are".

Compared to most of the stories here on TTH that's incredibly good.
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks. I'll fix it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, kind of weird. I sort of get where cole is coming from but not knowing where you dug him up for a crossover makes it a little difficult but I don't have a problem with wondering because he isn't very sympathetic. This story doesn't seem as good as the previous one but it's better than most.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Genuka
Review:
Nice ending.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
yes, save her. all stories are improved with dru. good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
wow. The ending of that chapter was just... stunning. Poor Dru. Poor Doyle. Wow. I kind of wish you'd saved Doyle, but Cordelia fighting like a crazy thing was exactly the reaction I'd have expected. Remember in canon we didn't see really see them grieve... as I recall the episode ended.

I believe there would be immense grief.

Blue

PS. I'd love to see Cole take down Wolfram and Hart.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Best line ever! I love Dru and I love YOUR Dru. And I love Doyle's droll comeback too!


"Mr. Visions-Give-Me-A-Headache had a vision of this place." said Drusilla disparagingly, as everyone else was to busy trying not to vomit or busy examine the building to answer.

"I go by Doyle now." said Doyle, having recovered slightly.

Had me shrieking with laughter!!!

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Genuka
Review:
If Dru dies, bye bye Wolf, Ram, and Hart! *Mwahahahaha!!!!*

Yes, I's sleep deprived.... *heee*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Genuka
Review:
I'm betting that Cole actually being there is going to screw with what she saw...
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Genuka
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Oh dear. I wonder how Cole's presence will affect Cordy's ability to see? Will she still get the debilitating migraines?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AllenPitt
Review:
Am I a bad person for wondering if Cordelia has gotten Doyle's Vision-ity? Good death scene by the way. I always liked that commercial, "Our rats are low!"....
Considering how badly things turned out for just about everyone in the Fang Gang, having Cole around can only help. Nice connecting the Triad with Wolf, Ram, and Hart.
Drusilla probably needs lots of therapy. Trying to think of anyone in either series who could do it. Coven Willow went to after S6? Have it turn out the Rosenbergs work is with supernats and they don't realize Willow is also "in the biz"?
Comments from author:
Crap, I forgot to have Cordelia kiss Doyle! Damnit, I'll go fix that now...

About Drusilla being insane, I thought that seeing as how many, many stories have people with the Sight being at least slightly crazy, is not downright insane, that that combined with Angelus' tortures made her crazy. Therefore, with Cole around (being helpful) and blocking her visions 'cause he's from another dimension, that she'd be less crazy. I haven't decided yet whether I'll have her do some kind of therapy as well.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Genuka
Review:
Awww, evil cliffy!!!! What's he do? Dang it! gotta know!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Genuka
Review:
Oooohhhhh, good choice of reasoning! More please!
Comments from author:
Your wish is my command...
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Blackett
Review:
Nice update. Curious to see what happens next.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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