Review of chapter "Angelic Visitation" from SariLane
I sincerely love and adore this series!
Comments from author:
Thank you! And if you want to see all the prompts that I've either written, or plan to, just go to nevernormal.com- it's my personal blog where I post my updates
Review By [SariLane
] • Date [27 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fairplay Wounds" from AnotherJD
The story seems to be from Beckett's point of view; that makes it seem odd to have the sentence 'Javier mentally winced' in the middle.
Also, Faith is not 'statuesque' (tall and dignified). A possible alternative: 'striking'.
Review By [AnotherJD
] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated