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Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from DieselDriver
Review:
Would have been really interesting if we could have heard what Lorne would have told her had she not thrown that away.
Comments from author:
Had to pop back a skim the story to refresh my memory!

Not waiting to hear what Lorne might say was sort of the point. By the time Faith saw Lorne she was about ready to do anything and seeing one more 'freak' just tipped her over the edge so she goes off to join the army. Who knows, Lorne might have told her to do that anyway.

Thanks for reading,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from WhippingDawn
Review:
Well, I just finished it, and I like it! Plus, I'm starting to understand her situation better in further episodes (like "I'm not a loser", which I plan to read again from the beginning in its right place). Damn it must be hard to keep the whole series coherent. You have all my admiration!

You know, I think I'm just gonna locate all of your stories and read them all!
Comments from author:
It was/is a struggle particularly as I started from the middle and worked outwards!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [12 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Makes sense, why she ended up joining the Army. Short, but a good read.
Comments from author:
The perils of writing prequels. The longer they are the more chance there is of contradicting yourself.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from BillieBog
Review:
Love these stories. thanks
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from EasterCat
Review:
I was a touch disappointed you didn't get to fit in another Lehrer title for this story. Because you are using "Bright College Days" for the next fic, I will forgive your transgression. It also helps this story was entertaining and didn't require knowledge of Boomtown.
Comments from author:
Cheers.

Ya know sometimes Lehrer just doesn't fit!

D.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from PATM
Review:
Fantastic read! What goes through the recruiters mind has to be priceless when she speaks to him by his rank. How Willow must be suffering. I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Gideon
Review:
The good guys win again! I am kinda surprised Faith hurt her hand punching that guy, did he have a metal plate in his head or something? I did like how Lorne helped her find her path without even speaking to her :)
Comments from author:
Not appreciating how strong she is Faith probably hit him a bit harder than she meant to. Also the harder you hit the more likely you are to hurt yourself, which I feel includes slayers. But Slayers have the imptoved healing so it would have been worse if she was normal.

Never hit someone on the jaw, you're likely to do as much damage to yourself as them.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
I just saw a few chapters of Boomtown, it was kinda cool, too bad it was so messed up by the network.
I really wanna see the aftermath of Faith getting shot after she and Mandrake saved the planet, specially I wanna see how Wolfram & Hart is gonna pay xD.
Cool fic, see ya!!!
Comments from author:
Cheers.

The next story is a gentle one, gives Faith a bit of a rest...poor girl, people have been shooting holes in her, she deserves a a change of pace!

D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I look forward to it with much anticpation. Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Cool,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice work, as you usually do. I had totally forgotten about Boomtown. I thought it was one of those shows that started out interesting and then became quite average. I like the way Faith keeps brushing up against the supernatural world, but then just walks away still oblivious.

Faith should have fun in Basic Training, being super-amazon and all. At least she won't be going to Basic at Ft. Lewis Washington in the middle of the frakking winter. Did you know the original M-16, not the much improved M-16A1, could freeze solid in very cold weather? And water in the old metal canteens could turn into one big strangely shaped ice cube? Ah, the joyous memories! Lol!
Comments from author:
My old SLR used to freeze solid, whatever the weather, after three rounds! Not something you want to know when you're on foot patrol in NI...luckily I was my sections Bren gunner so I had two gats to chose from.

Faith will be headed to Fort Knight in Oregon...I needed somewhere with lots of trees. On the bright side it will be summer.

Also; super-amazon? Hmmm, you know what happens to girls who show super-powers? They get to meet the guys in lab coats who carry clipboards!!!

D.

Also freezing to the side of your tank was never fun...ah...the good old days.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from kalibex
Review:
Nice feint in the last chapter... :)
Comments from author:
Cheers,
D.
Review By [kalibex] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from RafMereC
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from RafMereC
Review:
nice
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Gideon
Review:
Well Faith survived her first encounter with a vampire. The bad news is that the vampire did too! She should ask some of the girls at her workplace for advice about what to do next time!
I like how you show us a bit of Faith's emotional vulnerability, even as she tries to hide it from everyone. That was one of the best things about her on the show. Now she doesn't know why she feels the way she does but she at least has the self awareness to know that she does feel that way. I love that she feels protective of the kid too. Slayer instincts kicking in at last? I don't think the mob will be too happy with Faith after the next couple of things her instincts prompt her to do!
Comments from author:
Oh yes, poor old Faith feeling stuff and not knowing why.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from BillieBog
Review:
I remember this episode. I really enjoyed watching it and Boomtown was a great series. Thanks so much this story.

Billie
Comments from author:
Yep, a new twist on the cop show...then the network screwed around with it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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