Great story. Can't wait to see when it'll die. Been reading fanfics for about 15 years and i got to say i hate ones like this the most. Awesome stories you know will never get finished but can't help but read anyways.
Review By [Downery] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
this story is awesome. I could not stop laughing by the end. can't wait to see what Alexander does next. keep up the great story.
Comments from author:
Laughing maniacally? Yeah, I do that too. Thanks for the review.
Review By [sandman] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ralphmullins
Review:
That was a fantastic story so far I can't wait to read more chapters for this story. I would like to see him create some of those watch like critters that help the character he is fused with.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [ralphmullins] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Between having sucked up a great deal of Janus' power and being driven to accept and act upon the change, Heterodyne has gained true ascendency.
Xander remains Xander, but he's not going to limit himself to being the Zeppo. I doubt he could if he wanted to, now.
Comments from author:
The process of a Great Spark coming into power is always messy. You throw in Janus...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
I'm enjoying this story so far, thank you for taking the time out of your life to write and post it. My only complaint is i don't know who the crossover characters are, but I'm sure I'll figure it out eventually.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Work is eating up my free time but I really enjoy writing.
Review By [iamjmph] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Wow. I really enjoy this story, and pity the x-com aliens when Xander and DC villains get around annoying him. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Sincerely
John
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter.
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
I hope I'll be getting better fast. I had to go to the hospital the other day, turns out I had appendicitis and needed it taken out. If you've never had surgery before, I'll let you know that it can make you feel as weak as a child, and when trying to get out of bed(or apparently getting out of a seat I'm leaning back in) I feel like a turtle stuck on its back. I also hope I can somehow find a way to pay the bills with how little I make in my part-time job. I was actually lucky I think, I got it caught early and unlike some descriptions I've heard of my symptoms were extremely mild, it's only because my dad said something and I did research that I even suspected I should go to the ER, and the doctor said the surgery went smoothly with no complications. If you ever feel a pain, (which apparently for me doesn't have to be a sharp intense stabbing pain like for some others) that starts out around your belly button and then seems to move to the lower right side(usually), then go to the hospital ASAP to get checked out, don't mess around as it can get really bad if not treated and it bursts. I almost didn't as the systems weren't anywhere near as noticeable as my research said they should be and I was reluctant to get the ER bill if it was a false alarm. I'm glad I did now before it got worse, but I haven't gotten the bills yet. But hey, at least I'm alive to try to pay them, and apparently the financial aid is going to help pay part of the bill which I thought might be the most expensive because I make so little and don't have much in the way of assets. I really kind of hope that with all the hospital visits my family has been getting lately and for the last few years, god decides to cut us a break and let us win even a share of the lottery jackpot. It would be a major major help to us.
Sorry for laying this all on you, but I just felt I needed to vent.
Oh, and I really hope I can get well enough to go see Iron Man 3, I was looking forward to it, but it's probably not best to see it while recovering and on pain meds, although I just took one almost an hour ago and I don't feel too woozy, although it's 3 am, so its hard to tell what might be the time, and what might be the pill.
Comments from author:
Damn, sorry to hear that. I've had surgery myself, a minor one thank god, so vent away. I know how much it sucks. I hope you feel better soon.
Thanks for the review and get some rest. There is always more movies to watch.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
I just hope you have him execute the Joker in front of millions when he tries to use Ace's powers on the people only to meet a grizzly end at the hands of Xander...and save Ace of course.
Comments from author:
Well, I do like Ace.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]