Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review.

Don't worry about being late. As long as you read, enjoy, and review (so that I *know* that people are reading and enjoying [that part goes more towards other readers reading the reviews]), I'm more than happy! Hope I can get more to you soon!

Great chapter. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)

Thank you!

I'm curious how come Batman didn't recognize his own story in her little spiel. And, didn't react to it.

I told Crystalblaze one reasoning as to why he didn't react, and I'll let you know that he probably figured it out by the time she woke back up. Honestly, I'm a bit more curious as to how she's going to act when she wakes up on Earth.

I loved the way she told Bruce about.. Batman.

He's nowhere near stupid enough to have missed the descriptions of himself, Diana, and Clark.

This is really a wonderful piece. thank you.

Two things. One, I thank you for the lovely comment, and two, how often does he exactly react in a noticeable way to things pertaining to him? Take, for example, Batman Begins, when they bring up Batman in that conversation in the Hotel. He doesn't react in an "I'm guilty!" sort of way like most people would. Instead he says "Well, anyone who dresses up like a bat at night *clearly* has issues.

First, great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Second, I'll read and review your and your sister's stories when I can. I'm currently very busy with real life BS. Good luck with your further endeavours.

Thank you for the well wishing, and I wish you luck with dealing with real life BS!

Some parts of the story are a touch confusing, as in I'm not really sure who the main character is yet... she seems insane... or something close... with the voices... but we don't exactly have a name yet... or really even a goal for the story... I am curious where it will end up but it's sort of one of those... ah... 3 chapters in and I can't see the cross yet... or even where... anyways good luck with grades and life.

Okay, few things to say to that. # 1) I like the fact that someone actually picked up on that, meaning I've actually got it somewhat realistic so far. # 2) The main goal is just life. That's the way it is for a number of stories that I have read, though for most of those they are more towards "50₵ romance novels" variety than what I'm aiming for here. # 3) She doesn't have a name. I'll try to have Batman show up and ask her name, but the universe that I'm writing about may not cooperate with me. # 4) The cross is mentioned, though not in these chapters that are up, and I'm thinking about crossing it with another story, but that's way down the line *if* I do it. Basically, she is the entire cross for the time being. I'll show a bit of how soon (hopefully). # 5) Thank you for the offer of luck with the grades. I will take it, care for it, ... (Brian Regan never said anything more on the subject. Nothing intelligible anyway.) # 6) Will you help me figure something out for a second future chapter? I'll email you my request for help right after I've finished this comment.

Really glad to see more of this. was thinking Real Life had truly mugged you and your Muse by this point. Enjoyinhg it, want more Batman/CrazyVoicesInHerHead Lady to interact more...

Please???

*Slow smirk* Don't worry, I'll do my best to do so. And, yes, I have been mugged by Real Life a little, so here's hoping that my grades in school don't mug me this semester (or my lack of musicians. *Shrug*)

P.S. -Many thanks for enjoying it so far. Hope you enjoy my other stories and coming chapters just as much.

Okay, one thing. You have this in the wrong category - it should be Justice League of America rather than Justice Society of America.

Okay. Question: How do I fix it? Do I simply go to it and click the "Edit Story" button...
I'll find out and then fix the review comment.
*Edit* Actually, you're the one who had it wrong. I didn't pick the Justice ^Society^, I picked the Justice ^League^. Now, here's a question: ignoring any wrongs (percieved or otherwise) in the titular settings, how's my story?

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Thanks! Hope you like the rest (as it is written)!

Interesting start. Keep up the good work.

Why thank you.

Nice start.Can't be Big Barda can it?Batman would need help since he is hurting.

No, it's not. She will, however, show up later with her husband. The girl and Big Barda are good friends. Not saying how they met just yet though.

keep going. a cliffhanger in the first chapter drives people crazy. FEED US MORE!

Will do! :)

Sounds like the JLA have a new Hero! Was there a glowing circle in her chestplate?

Not yet. *EVIL LAUGH!!!*

So far so good. Shouldn't this be under Justice League rather than Justice Society of America?

Not sure, but this is a fledgling world, so I'm mostly making it up as I go, with a few things preset. The only things I do know for sure is that she ends up in front of the JLA (as has already happened), and that she helps out people across the world, like your average hero. Not a superhero, and she explains the difference in the story later.
Can't wait till I get more onto paper.