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Review of chapter "Vagrancy and Reporters" from raxadian
Review:
Won't be a Surprise when Abby meets Clack?
Comments from author:
I plan it to be. Not saying it'll be the greatest thing in the world, but here's hoping!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting Ready for a Road Trip" from raxadian
Review:
Okay, so she is really a dark goddess? And Why he helped her uh?
Comments from author:
Well, I wouldn't call her dark, just complicated and currently unexplored in public view, so to speak. Thanks for reviewing so much, by the way! :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The clone" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, time travel uh?
Comments from author:
Not yet, but it is kinda obvious foreshadowing, hunh? ;)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exposition and a small fight" from raxadian
Review:
Wait, she is from the Marvel universe and Slayers exist there? And she is also Black Widow somehow?
Comments from author:
Well, I like your inventiveness, but still no, like I said earlier.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elsewhere in the galaxy, right at that moment..." from raxadian
Review:
Definitively Buffy, Faith would get along better with the dark side.
Comments from author:
In this kinda case, I'm gonna go with "No." Not even the worst characters of BtVS would get along with Darkseid and pals. So to speak.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She woke up" from raxadian
Review:
Responsibility? Want to save people? Most likely Buffy.
Comments from author:
Nope! :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from raxadian
Review:
The girl is Dawn, Buffy or Faith I presume?
Comments from author:
Nope, she's an OC, based on another OC. :) When I get that far, I think that it'll be kinda interesting to see it. Hope you continue to follow me until I finally manage to get there! :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vagrancy and Reporters" from MageMan
Review:
sorry should have said it was breaking my willing suspension of disbelief
Comments from author:
It's okay. Though, I think part of it is the fact that I haven't added a new chapter to help explain it, and thus, help out your willing suspension. I'll try to work on the newest chapter and get it out somewhat soon, but no promises (my writer's block is extremely powerful.)
Review By [MageMan] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vagrancy and Reporters" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Why thank you!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Ready for a Road Trip" from MageMan
Review:
It sounds like the character is a depowered Anya, that went as Fem!Tony Stark for halloween. Only Anya was depowered after season 2 of Buffy. She was then flung to Apokolips where she was killed and then cloned and had her memories inplanted. After years of training and service she was allowed to train a group from Granny Goodness's Ophanage. Once that had been compleated she went on several "missions" that she never told anyone anything about. (This first part is interesting, because I dont think I've ever seen it attempted.)

Meeting up with the parents of Superman, offing Jor-El's deranged uncle, landing on Themyscira and bumping into Xena and Gabrielle 300 years before the story started. (This part has left me scratching my head thinking that she went to other dimenions to do her meet the people behind the heros before meeting the heros. Kinda bordering on BoSD for me). *I'm not sure if the Gabrielle mentioned is the same as the one from Xena.*

You have portrayed her as really messed up mentaly, which is good. People want a mystery, but they also want to unravel it with out ending up with a bad taste in thier mouths after sinking thier teeth into it. Hopfully questions will be answered but with more questions needing to be asked, but without the story devolving into an ass-pull.

One thing I wouldn't mind seeing more of is discription of what is around the characters. Where are they, are they in a room, out side, if they are inside what type of mood is the room aiming for, is the decor succeeding or failing. What gender are the characters, what do they look like (even though a lot of these characters have been establised in the minds of nearlly ever reader, you still need to show thier body language, which is hard to do using the writen word.)

Good start, I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Couple things here. First, thanks for the honest review saying that you like it and how you like it.

Second, I don't remember the whole mention of meeting- Oh, yeah. But that wasn't meeting Xena people, it was meeting Hippolyta and her family that long ago. Though, I may ret-con the date.

Third, What's BoSD? And I'm not kidding here on this question. Email me please! Or just leave a new review.

Fourth, Thanks for the vote of confidence and the assurance that I'm doing it right! :) Still, more is to come on that subject. Heck, more is to come, period.

Fifth, I will do my best to keep that in mind, about the body language. Can't promise success, but I will promise that I will try.

Finally, Thanks for the final bit of recommendation. In the meantime, while we're waiting for a new chapter for this story, may I suggest my other stories (with The Misadventures of SG-6 in particular, since it eventually ties in to this one's storyline)? Or perhaps batzulger's stories or ShadowMaster's stories? Even JCHatten's stories and so on. I have a long list of people I could whole-heartedly recommend to you. (Final words here: And please, don't forget to review if you read one of mine, or really any amazing story that I can think of. I'm sure that the authors, along with myself, would truly appreciate the sort of in-depth constructive and caring comments like this one that you left for me.)

All in all, thank you whole-heartedly for the amazing comment, and I hope you have a wonderful day! :)
Review By [MageMan] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Ready for a Road Trip" from deathgeonous
Review:
This is cute, fun funny, a little scattered and disjointed, but I'm SURE it'll all make sense sometime. 'Looks to the left, looks to the right, then shrugs.' Anyways, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now. Oh, and this one seems under reviewed as well.
Comments from author:
That's my hope too! :) Hopefully, it'll turn out well because I seem to be digging myself into a hole in my head with this story. With luck, that won't be a problem.

Please, keep reading this as I write it. I hope to see more of your reviews as I go along.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting Ready for a Road Trip" from Dragonbaita
Review:
Sorry for not reviewing more but I am disabled and it is hard to type .
This story is FANTASTIC!! I really like Our Lady of Iron!
Comments from author:
Why thank you! Hopefully, I can get the next chapter finished and uploaded soon!
Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Ready for a Road Trip" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review.
Comments from author:
Don't worry about being late. As long as you read, enjoy, and review (so that I *know* that people are reading and enjoying [that part goes more towards other readers reading the reviews]), I'm more than happy! Hope I can get more to you soon!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The clone" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Exposition and a small fight" from Letomo
Review:
I'm curious how come Batman didn't recognize his own story in her little spiel. And, didn't react to it.
Comments from author:
I told Crystalblaze one reasoning as to why he didn't react, and I'll let you know that he probably figured it out by the time she woke back up. Honestly, I'm a bit more curious as to how she's going to act when she wakes up on Earth.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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