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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. I love that Luna got Xander to admit that he needed to talk to his friends. This is yet another wonderful story in this series and I am fining that I love it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sdavidm
Review:
Cute story. I think Xander and Luna would make an interesting couple.

One thing though: I don't get the aversion to "muggle". It's just a made up word for "non-magical". I don't see why Xander would find it offensive.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I found them amazingly compatible once I started thinking about it.

The problem is not that it's a word that is made up or that it denotes non-magicals. It's the way it is used by people who see them as less than themselves.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [28 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JJDudeman
Review:
Even without her later awesome moments in your conclusion, this is probably my favorite fanfic interpretation of Luna. You show Xander's POV very well - glaring at the perverse inanimate, who-admits-to-no-middle-name charm, but also hints of his pigheadedness and (COMPLETELY JUSTIFIED) vamp hate - that line about men are capable of anything but he's only met 2 decent vamps is both true (that's the Buffyverse-approved truth) and still him (still refusing to flat-out praise the souled duo). Great done-in-one, all of these are, though the Percy/Dawn one is MERELY good (don't see the attraction).
Comments from author:
Thank you, that is a great compliment. I rather like Luna myself. Xander's hatred of vampires is completely justified. When it blinds him to all else is when it gets dangerous.

I thought Dawn would like someone studious who could still kick ass (or arse) And for some reason Percy came to mind.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [15 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mordare
Review:
I really love this one.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I enjoy writing Luna. It shows, I think.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Mordare] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
She correctly identifies and helps him neutralize a demon and notices when he casts a spell and what spell it was but he is surprised she knows about the supernatural world and that her magic is real?

Punishing Buffy for not choosing him to be a boyfriend?
Comments from author:
Xander considered her a dilletante, he's never seen anyone use a wand. He assumed she was just a bit wacky, without knowledge of the darker things of the supernatural life. He thinks she's a bit like the 'Wannablessed be's' of Willow's first coven. Pindar is appropriate γλυκύ δ᾽ἀπείρῳ πόλεμος/Dulce bellum inexpertis : War is sweet to those who have no experience with it

And no, he's not that shallow. Its that Fray adjacent thing again.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this was a good story
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [loretta] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
So very well done!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad to hear you like Luna and Xander together.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Bill] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Delightful story! Hoping for Xander and Luna to deepen their relationship!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you, no doubt they will.Thanks for reviewing
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [28 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
That great personal magic of the heart. You aren't going to continue this cool story line? Luna is the bomb.
Comments from author:
The stories in this series are interwoven. They will be back, but as part of an ensemble cast.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [PATM] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good pairing, with a well written range of circumstances bringing them together.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope you enjoyed the follow up too.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
Review:
I liked this a lot. It struck the right note between humor and serious which I think is hard to to with those two characters. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Both can be very serious and yet funny. I'm glad you think I struck the right note.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
Review:
I liked this a lot. It struck the right note between humor and serious which I think is hard to to with those two characters. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank you, it was what I was aiming for. I hope you like the sequel as well.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
They make a cute couple, I like it. And she's right. Instead of letting it all fester, the 4 scoobies should get together and talk it out. If they can't be friends anymore, then fine, but they should talk. After 7 years they've all done things that hurt the others. Mostly they just patched things over and pretended everything was fine. That doesn't work in the long run.
Comments from author:
I thought so. We will be seeing more of them, but it might take a few stories.

I quite agree. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadowman
Review:
A good chapter I hope we will be seeing more of this series as well as your other ones.
Comments from author:
Thank you. One of these is up, working on the other series.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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