This story is showing real promise. I like the way that you are actively incorporating Buffy into the Supernatural episodes. I've always thought that there would be instant chemistry between Dean and Buffy. They are by far my favorite crossover pairing. The only thing that I'm not thrilled with is the addition of the comics as cannon. I usually try to pretend that the comics don't exist. However, it is usually easy to ignore in the story so it doesn't really reduce my enjoyment of this story.
Comments from author:
I am cherry picking plot details from the comics. I know not every one likes them but there were parts in there that I really wanted to explore so I am using them as back story. I hope you stick with me and the story. Thank you so much for the review.
Review By [arianwyn] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Hey, I just found this story and I am loving what you have written so far, I can't wait to read more. Do you have a posting schedule? I was very thrilled to read what you are planning on writing, I can't wait. I'm glad you are adding in your own ideas, makes it much more enjoyable to read when there are surprises in store!! Looking forward to the rest. Lee Anne x
Comments from author:
Thank you so much Lee Anne! I have no real schedule, I post them when I finish them. I'm working on the next chapter but its been a bear do I don't think I'll have it ready for another 3 or 4 weeks sorry. I am not a naturally fast writer at all. But it really helps to get through those blocks when I hear other people like the story :)
Review By [laleangel] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting so far: I'm not sure what 'the seed of wonder' is, but I never had the time to follow the comics.
If Castiel made arrangements for Buffy to help Dean, he could have made things a whole lot easier on himself by speaking to her - Pamela's eyes didn't need to get burned out, for example.
I like the story, and I'm going to keep reading. I understand you are trying to keep to the plot of SPN 4x01 as much as possible, but when you added Buffy, remember that some of the events that happened in that episode no longer make sense, especially when you add in Buffy's ability to Hear Castiel - a lot of plot movement from the beginning to barn scene no longer makes sense. Sure, it's interesting, but, completely moot with Castiel's last minute reveal at the end where he tells Dean that he made sure Buffy would be there to help out all along!
Looking forward to the next chapter - because I do like the story!
Comments from author:
thank you for such a great review!
Seed of wonder was in the comics. I haven't followed them too much, it was mainly there to add some back story to Buffy and will play into background info for a few other details that aren't huge to the story.
Castiel did not know Buffy could hear him, I've been coming from that direction since the begining. Castiel is following orders, he did not pick her. Basically, she is the body guard and dean is the celebrity. Cas was focused only on getting Dean to hear him. And Buffy cannot hear the angels in the same was Anna can either.
Yes I do plan a changing plot details because I do not want to just redo supernatural and give buffy a few lines here and there. Thanks so much again, feel free to point out anything you think is wrong!
Review By [Innogen] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Really enjoying this! Was super excited to see an update from you! I like how your weaving the seasons of the show in. will Deffo be tuning in for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [raintree] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
