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Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from raxadian
Review:
Again, sucks not to be Xena for him.
Comments from author:
Sucks not to be Xena for everyone except Slayers!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from CageFire
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Nice new chapter. Keep up the good work. Not sure how I feel about Jenny and Kendra seemingly /still/ ending up dead.
Comments from author:
Hey, Willow's the one that got a massive bookcase dumped on top of her. Worry about her!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from MistofRainbows
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This feels like railroading. Xander changes... gets better but things still go wrong in the same ways or worse... then again why the hell the gang waited for nightfall I don't understand... doing the spell in the middle of the day at a different location... like oh I don't know a HOUSE where the vampires can't get. I guess I was expecting a bit more from the crew... it felt like a kick in the face chapter...

I commend your writing skills to make it that painful... but yeah. Sorry, this came off more negative than I wanted.
Comments from author:
I had to wonder that myself. Why in canon did they choose to wait until nighttime, and why didn't they do it somewhere safe, like in Willow's house or Giles' apartment? Okay, the meta-reason drives everything here: Joss wanted to set up an ultra-dynamic season finale.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from lunalurker
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It seems to be a law of the universe, and a very strange one at that: the more prepared you are, the more things go wrong and the worse they turn out anyway, apparently just to spite your efforts. Some kind of canon-inertia, perhaps.
Poor Jenny, and Kendra, and Xander, and everyone. This just turned absolutely *awful*.
Comments from author:
It's pretty much like what happened in canon, when the only person who got out of that library unscathed was Cordelia. And it certainly is a law of fiction-writing that the mroe detailed you spell out your plan for the readers ahead of time, the more you need to make it go off the rails or else it's really boring. 'Leverage' is an excellent example of how to make this work.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from DieselDriver
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Would have been cool if he could have changed back to Xena and saved the day. Maybe in the next installment? We'll see what happens in the next exciting episode of "XENDRA"!
Comments from author:
Maybe he should try standing outside and yelling 'SHAZAM!' :D
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from Riniko
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No, do they always have to go for the stupid move and actually send Buffy off leaving the others behind. If she had just stayed behind, Angelus would not have been able to make paid his threat because he would have been bound again. But, no, they have to save Angel by bring him back and stuffing him into his dead body again with Angelus the demon, guess that is what they get for doing a evil deed. Kendra dead, Jenny possibly dead or dying, Willow crushed/buried under a bookcase, Xander broken and carried to a unknown fate, and Giles dragged off to be tortured for information. Even if they do get Mr. Hairgel back I don't see that as being anywhere near even. Kendra should have keep her lucky stake on her, because they sure as hell will never think to bring her back as she is not Buffy or Angel. Oh, lucky her.
All that out of the way, looking forward to the next chapter, but not the wait.
Comments from author:
Not only is it a bad plan, but nobody kept their hat. (Okay, that's an obscure ref, but it needed to be made.)
Review By [Riniko] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from Senko
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Really? They tried to re-ensoul Angel in the library rather than say the safety of someone's home where vampires can't just stroll in the back door and they didn't even put a protective circle big enough everyone can safely stay in it. Shame about Kendra although I did sort of see that one coming after you killed off Oz afterall if one main character can die in someones fix minor ines have no chance. Although I am surprised that when they were expecting trouble and had several extra people it wound up worse for them than in the cannon episode.
Comments from author:
I never figured out why they did that spell in the library. Willow's house! Her mom's never there. Amy's house. Giles' apartment. They have options! But it just seemed like it was always the library at night, so bad stuff could happen as planned by to Joss.
Review By [Senko] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from DavidEmpey
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Yikes! Yikes! Yikes!
Comments from author:
And this is perhaps *better* than things went in canon.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from VillageOrchid
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I had this strange feeling when they were doing a "restore the soul" improvised ritual that it might bring Xena's soul back to Xander - but then you seemingly went in another direction. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned next.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Two weeks from today...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part III" from raxadian
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Ah Acathla, it would be fun if that used to be Xena's sword, well not her usual sword, but one she got for doing that job.
Comments from author:
It wouldn't be the first demon she killed. She was pretty rough on the entire world supernatural population.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part II" from raxadian
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Oh, so is a kind of magical paperweight... I am also thinking about certain letter and a very old detective story.
Comments from author:
Ahh, Edgar Allan Poe. I love that story.

In canon, when they can't find an Orb of Thesulah, it turns out that *Giles* has been using one as a paperweight.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part I" from raxadian
Review:
Ah yes, another life-sucker, oh joy!
Comments from author:
They're everywhere. At least in Sunnydale.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Only Have Eyes, part III" from raxadian
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Well, that was pretty damn close.
Comments from author:
Thank goodness Giles has good aim with an extension cord. :D
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Only Have Eyes, part II" from raxadian
Review:
Fate just really wants Xander to be a girl, right?
Comments from author:
Well, Spike was man enough to admit that he was 'love's bitch' so maybe Xandr ought to admit that he's Fate's chewtoy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Only Have Eyes, part I" from raxadian
Review:
Well oz was a nice dude, but not an important character, now Amy, is she really Trying to be a good witch, will she become a rat? Will Xendra return? How far Sunnydale syndrome goes? Find out in the next chapter of Xendra, teenager warrior!
Comments from author:
Exactly! Secret fun fact from Joss Whedon himself: originally, Oz was going to be the one who got killed by Angelus, and Xander was the one who would turn out to be gay.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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