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Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from Valy
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Can't wait to read about Willow's plan. This fight with the vampires is shaping up a huge fight. Since Xena was know for her abilities to command armies then this may be where Xendra abilities will shine.
Thank you for creating this chapter and looking forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
It is likely to be more than just cunning, since it's Willow.
Review By [Valy] • Date [14 Jan 15] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from SirLee
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We don't need a neologism; "hematophagous" is the appropriate term.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hematophagy
Comments from author:
Well, the noun would be 'hematophage', but I think this has also been used in some of the vampire fiction out there.
Review By [SirLee] • Date [13 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Nice closer from Willow! I swear I could almost see the galloping horse and Black Adder being sung in the background...
Comments from author:
That's what I had in mind when I wrote it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Jan 15] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
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Cunning plan? You cut it off with "I've got a cunning plan"? Dang it, Diane! I gotta wait two weeks just to see what Will's cunning plan is? And I can't just guess, because your thinking is so outside of my box that if a character from my box ran into one of yours, my character would think yours was an alien!
Comments from author:
:D :D I promise it does not involve anyone in England with a last name beginning with 'B'.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from VillageOrchid
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There's a lot of interpersonal actions mixed in with the plot in this chapter - it is interesting to see which ones are more emotionally charged compared to others.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And Lance is really just hoping for a plan that puts Xendra in a Xena outfit.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from SilverWave
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Does your "cunning plan" involve explosives?

If not... its not that cunning :-)

Cheers.
Comments from author:
"Pinky, are you pondering what I'm pondering?"
"Sure Brain, but where will we get four pounds of Semtex, a M'Fashnik demon, and a ditch witch?"
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from hamishog
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I have a plan so cunning you could put a tail on it and call it a weasel...

Ha! Stupid human minions working for things that consider them lunchables. Stupid human minions that don't vaporize once you drive a sharp piece of wood through their chest. Disposing of bodies is so inconvenient. Would have been a different show if they'd had to clean up after themselves.
The shovel speech would have made more sense anyway.

And people should leave Willow alone.
For goodness sake, this story is AU since at no time during the run of the series was Xander actually turned into a woman, hilarious though that would have been (and definitely better than some of the stuff they did). It's been said before - you don't fall in love with a sex, you fall in love with a person. Tara came along at a time when Willow was ready to reach out to the possibilities. Had Willow met Kennedy in the same situation and at that same time she might never have ventured down that path. Who, not what.
The same holds true. If Xander had responded to Willow before the arrival of Buffy how would it have affected the dynamics of the group?
On the other hand I am thoroughly convinced that in love or not Xander would have roused Angel out and gone into the Master's lair. He just strikes me as that kind of guy.
It's like Shinji Ikari or Naruto or Harry Potter - there's absolutely no reason he shouldn't be a serial killer.
Comments from author:
Yes, I had that show in mind.

And yes, why would a human be working for a vampire? The answer will be important.
Review By [hamishog] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from DieselDriver
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"sparkle of vamps"

I thought you didn't like that term for a bunch of vampires. I seem to remember some quite descriptive terms someone came up with like "a puncture of vamps" etc. Stupid amateur wannabe phlebotomist hemavores anyway. I think I'd just prefer to refer to them as "Dust in the wind".

(is that the correct spelling - hemavore? hemovore? how do you spell it?)

From your reply to another review: "flying flame monkey demons that threw fiery monkey demon poo" at Vampires...
That would be so fun to watch. Maybe by the guys who did the disc world movie recently shown on TV.
Comments from author:
What I like and what Xander likes are two different things. :D

And it is probably 'hemovore' or 'haemovore' but since it's a neologism, you can spell it however you want in your own work.

The flaming monkey demons with the flaming poo were from a Harry Dresden book, and he has three different kinds of vamps to deal with. Flaming monkey demon poo would have been a great asset.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Funny interlude. I wonder if they'll simply firebomb the warehouse with home-made napalm. Very funny scenes, and some touching ones. Willow's still struggling with her sexuality it seems.
Comments from author:
Yes. Willow is struggling a great deal. Life is not as easy as suddenly saying 'hey, I'll be gay now!'
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVIII" from raxadian
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Well, I love that you are continuing the story, I still wonder what a Master Vamp is doing in Sunnnyhell during the Summer... and... will try try to burn the place? Molotov cocktails don't usually work on vamps, but in a closed space? They would do great!
Comments from author:
Well, throwing a molotov cocktail at a vamp is asking for trouble, because if he sees it coming, he's a lot faster than you: he'll grab it and hurl it right back at you.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Jan 15] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween, part I" from BotticellisMuse
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Just want to thank you and wish you and your family and Happy and Blessed New Year!
Comments from author:
Thanks! And the same to you.
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [31 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVII" from DieselDriver
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That's called thinking ahead and planning, not necessarily thinking outside the box. Although for most folks it might be outside of their mind's abilities to think of something before it happens. Like fledgling vamps, most people don't think.
Comments from author:
Planning. A wacky concept! Everyone seems to be able to plan from step A to step B, but lots and lots of people simply don't get that there's going to be a step C afterward.
Step A: I need money.
Step B: Hey, the bank has lots of money!
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Oh yeah, Step C is that people might object if I go through with Step B.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVII" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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Lovely to have an update on this one. It's interesting to have the nerds involved in a positive way that plays to their strengths.
Comments from author:
Thanks. In case you didn't realize, I'm updating this one every other Monday around noon (US Pacific Time).
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [30 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVII" from VillageOrchid
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Some very creative problem solving. And let me say, I think only you would be getting to part 18 of "A Summer Interlude." Not that I mind! I'm getting a big kick out of this. :)
Comments from author:
The gamer guys were always really creative. The fact that they were often creative for the wrong side was a problem...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part XVII" from Valy
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Fly monkeys from wizard of oz against vampires, that sounds strange and funny all at the same time. Can't wait to read about it. Xendra needs to wear some type of armor.
Comments from author:
Maybe Xendra could get the gamer guys to make some armor... only it's pretty certainly she would end up with an exact copy of Xena's armor, in a modern alloy.
Review By [Valy] • Date [30 Dec 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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