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Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from raxadian
Review:
Xendra, stop the winning, get free, free Giles, and look for Buffy!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DieselDriver
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Ok, short but with cliffhanger, sort of, Xander/Xena hanger anyway. She's smaller than he was, should be able to squirm free. Also, even teenager Xena should be stronger than Xander given the mythos they are from. Should aid in getting free and first aid knowledge from both to fix up G-man and get him to help.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Senko
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Yeah I'm going to have to agree with David Empey here that its a bit much calling Buffy selfish. She's a 16 year old girl called on to kill the man she loves frankly I'd be more concerned if she could just ignore her emotions and kill him. Being a slayer gives you strength and skill nothing more. Would you take the same attitude about Xander nit wanting to kill Willow in a later season when she loses herself to dark magic and tries to destroy the world? She's not even possessed when she does that.

Not much to say on the chapter as it pretty much follows cannon with the exception of Xander and Giles still being tied up. Only thing to say is the trouble with Seers especially insane ones is they aren't necessarily talking about now. By changing Xander from the girl in the boy to the boy in the girl she could have been setting up a lesbian relationship with Willow that ends with Tara being dragged back to her family and Xander being the one shot and killed by Warren so no ones around to talk Willow down and resulting in the end of the world.

Not that I really understood what Angel hoped to achieve by this as he's not likely to enjoy the results either. So he groped Xander, fingered her vagina and then focused on the anus . . . interesting priorities and he seems to have changed from wanting to date her to wanting to kill her as well. Also has he really changed in a teenaged Xena or into a female Xander (if you see the difference)?

EDIT
Hmmmm would it be more humiliating for a man to be turned into a girl and molested if he realizes its the body he'd have if born female rather than a strangers? For that matter would it be more humliating for a girl to be molested or to see another person with an exact copy of her body being molested?

EDIT 2
My mind goes to strange places.
Review By [Senko] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from SirLee
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I didn't watch the original episode, so I don't know if Spike acted similarly there. If he didn't, I think one possible interpretation of what happened here is that somebody goofed and resouled Spike instead of Angel.
Review By [SirLee] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Riniko
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If Angelus was resouled again right before Buffy sends Angel to hell again, she better hope he stays there. Because I don't think Xandra will give a damn when she rams that telephone pole sized stake through his chest and she better keep her mouth shut. Any vamp stupid enough to want to bring the real demons back should have all the others kill them. At least Spike did not seem to want that as he peeled out with Dru, though I think Xandra would have been a lot happier if he had at least cut one of her arms free before he ran. I am hoping the next chapter at least answers the question of who is still alive.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Ok...well, "bad spot" is somewhat underestimating his/her current situation - but it certainly could have been a *whole* lot worse.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from CageFire
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An okay chapter. I was a bit thrown off by the warning at the beginning. Perhaps you should've made it mentions of/references to rape or something similar and not stating it like somebody is actually raped. I almost didn't read the chapter.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Starfox
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Oh, sad and gripping chapter. Very dark. Not one of Buffy's finest moments even in canon, doubly so now. I wonder how Xendra will get out of this.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DavidEmpey
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"A good demonstration of Buffy's self-centered..."
Isn't that a little harsh? She didn't know Xander (Xendra?) and Giles were there.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DavidEmpey
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"Nobody dies if the girl stays in the boy," says Dru. And then she let the girl out of the boy. Or maybe put her back in the boy? What WAS Dru up to? Impatient readers want to know!
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from VillageOrchid
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A good demonstration of Buffy's self-centered earlier life not being erased by her sense of responsibility as the slayer. It is more of her default to be inwards and self-pittying, while Xander - even in changed form - is the one who looks out for his friends.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from raxadian
Review:
Again, sucks not to be Xena for him.
Comments from author:
Sucks not to be Xena for everyone except Slayers!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter. Keep up the good work. Not sure how I feel about Jenny and Kendra seemingly /still/ ending up dead.
Comments from author:
Hey, Willow's the one that got a massive bookcase dumped on top of her. Worry about her!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from MistofRainbows
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This feels like railroading. Xander changes... gets better but things still go wrong in the same ways or worse... then again why the hell the gang waited for nightfall I don't understand... doing the spell in the middle of the day at a different location... like oh I don't know a HOUSE where the vampires can't get. I guess I was expecting a bit more from the crew... it felt like a kick in the face chapter...

I commend your writing skills to make it that painful... but yeah. Sorry, this came off more negative than I wanted.
Comments from author:
I had to wonder that myself. Why in canon did they choose to wait until nighttime, and why didn't they do it somewhere safe, like in Willow's house or Giles' apartment? Okay, the meta-reason drives everything here: Joss wanted to set up an ultra-dynamic season finale.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from lunalurker
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It seems to be a law of the universe, and a very strange one at that: the more prepared you are, the more things go wrong and the worse they turn out anyway, apparently just to spite your efforts. Some kind of canon-inertia, perhaps.
Poor Jenny, and Kendra, and Xander, and everyone. This just turned absolutely *awful*.
Comments from author:
It's pretty much like what happened in canon, when the only person who got out of that library unscathed was Cordelia. And it certainly is a law of fiction-writing that the mroe detailed you spell out your plan for the readers ahead of time, the more you need to make it go off the rails or else it's really boring. 'Leverage' is an excellent example of how to make this work.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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