Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Mordare
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I finally got back to reading. Glad to see you have kept this one going. Love the story.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from banditdoz
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He really needs to coat that thing in silver!
Comments from author:
Pour holy water all over it before throwing it. Or inscribe crosses all over the gripping edge. Silver would only help if he was facing werewolves.
Oh wait, that's a legitimate concern in Sunnydale. Thanks for pointing it out. :-)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Zorgdub
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Awesome. Also, I see what you did there.
Comments from author:
I do that a lot. :-)
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Amberdrake
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Obviously Angelus doesn't read Buffy fanfic. Endangering willow in front on Xander never ends well. And throwing things at Giles' head will only add to his concussion collection. :)
Comments from author:
That was one of several scenes in that whole Angelus storyline that bugged me, because he would spend all this effort setting up something stupid, and then he'd just go hide for a week or two. Granted, they were constrained by the weekly nature of the series, but still... I thought Angelus could do something more creative. After all, he knows how people react, and he knows what it will do to Xander if Xander thinks it is his fault that Giles got horribly killed in front of everyone else.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from MistofRainbows
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You're a lot more evil when you're writing this story I think... It's Willow... not like he couldn't take the shot.
Comments from author:
I think there are other stories where I let my evilness *really* show. People are still complaining about the "Cross Purposes" vignette where Sam went all DCU Evil Scientist. I blame my muse Agatha.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Chargone
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Oooooooh dear.
That's rather unfortunate...
Comments from author:
It occurred to me that Angelus might actually be doing something clever, instead of something ruthless and cruel, but stupid.
Review By [Chargone] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from JanessaRavenwood
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Ok, on multiple fronts here, that ain't good...
Comments from author:
And there is no Soldier Boy memory to help Xander land a cool rocket launcher (which they never used ever again, no matter how convenient it could have been).
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Oxnate
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Yay for another chapter. Very interesting, the slight changes you made to canon here. Loved the alley fight scene by the way. Short a brutal. Perfect.
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EDIT: Actually, the changes I was talking about were for the meet and greet with Angelus. I don't think Giles was there the first time and there definitely wasn't a chakram.
Comments from author:
Actually, we'll never know if the fight in the alley at the bus station is canon or not. In canon, Xander really did get sent to watch the bus station. In the middle of the night. By himself. (What? Were they serious? Send an untrained teenager into vamp-infested areas in the dead of night to watch for... more vamps? Yeesh.) The only thing we learn about his trip in canon is that a four hundred pound wino offered to 'wash his hair'. So I kept that, more or less.
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from Riniko
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Think Xander did get a good thought on getting rid of the Judge right before Dead Boy showed up, just his luck. How Angelus expects to get away with all the people around him makes me wonder, oh that's right Buffy would let him kill them all before hurting him first. Expect Giles might get hit or glazed if he dodges right, please let's hope they don't fall to pieces if he does get hit hard as that is likely his plan to stall them for the Judge to gain more power. Xander should not blame himself, it is more Buffy's fault if any, but me all know he is take the blame-man.
Comments from author:
It would have been a lot worse if Angelus had showed up and had given Xander the chance to spill his plan, at which point Angelus would have realized he needed to kill Xander and Willow immediately, and play psycho games elsewhere.
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part V" from VillageOrchid
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Exciting and... different.
Comments from author:
Things will slowly change, so the big deviations will be much later.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part IV" from VillageOrchid
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A good bit of semi-AU Xander-centric Sunnydale plot.
Comments from author:
In the original, Xander comes back from the bus station and only says that a 400 pound wino offered to wash his hair.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part IV" from banditdoz
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Hahaha you would think he knew better cant wait to see how he gets out of this one ;D
Comments from author:
Yeah, he kind of put his foot in it, along with his leg and his internal organs.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part IV" from Zorgdub
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So basically, yet another night in Sunnyhell for Xander.
Hahaha, he has the worst luck. Or the best luck, as far as I'm concerned ; it does make things interesting.
Comments from author:
You'd think Xander would know better. But then, he doesn't hang out in stupid places ordinarily, unless he's got The Slayer backing him up.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part IV" from vidicon
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Xander, Xander, Xander... Good to see that depsite all of Xena's influence, you can still be an idiot. I wonder how many of he wino's and drug addicts are demons too...
And I hope that Buffy won't hump Angel this time...
Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
If those winos and addicts aren't demons, why haven't they been eaten yet? Do they taste bad? Maybe there's a serious consequence to imbibing from the loaded, since Spike once recounted being steoned after drinking an LSD-using hippie at Woodstock.
As for Buffy, she's already got The Judge... and no Soldier Boy Xander to come up with a rocket launcher. Uh-oh.
Review By [vidicon] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise / Innocence, part IV" from Oxnate
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I've had a theory that there must be a couple 'women' like that hooker vamp turning guys to keep the sunnydale streets full of male newbies to keep Buffy busy.
Comments from author:
It seems like Buffy kills half a dozen vamps every night she's out patrolling. That's a couple thousand vamps a year. Those vamps have to come from *somewhere*.
It's also possible vamps all over the world (or at least all over the US) are saying "go west, young vamp" to annoying recently-sired loser-vamps just to get rid of them. "The streets of Sunnydale are paved with blood, and there's unwary bloodbags walking around unprotected all the time!"