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Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
The plot might be simple, but it’s that simplicity that makes it great, in my opinion.

Clark/Anya might seem like an unusual choice of pairing at first glance, but when you consider that Clark fell in love with a woman who’s never afraid to let you know what she thinks, and then contrast it with Anya’s surprising fondness for the guy who screws up but is willing to try and do the right thing, it actually works rather well even without the ‘prompt’ of them being stuck in the same place for several months with only each other for company.

The initial wish was one of those simple but dramatic twists- we’re so used to thinking of Lex as the villain it’s fascinating to realise how much trouble the world would have been in if he hadn’t been there to help Clark in the early days-, and subsequent developments certainly make sense (Although I’m still a bit confused on what wish Anya granted for vengeance against Clark, even if her assessment of Lana certainly works; Clark was too hung up on the IDEA of Lana at times), culminating neatly in the exceptional moment when the League, reduced to a fraction of their ‘true’ power and with no real knowledge of what Clark can be, are still willing to walk through fire on his recommendation for a slim chance to make the world a better place.

All in all, an intriguing story with some definite potential; any chance of more set in this universe (Not that I’m not enjoying ‘Red Pride’, I assure you).
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from Runewolf
Review:
I really enjoyed this. Thanks.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow great wishverse story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well done use of Anya in a Smallville xo that still relates back to the Buffy-verse.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
As I've said before, I think you have some good ideas in your work. However, I recommend a beta reader to assist with proofreading. Also, I think you really have enough here for a piece 5x longer, but that part is up to you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell's Bells" from Greywizard
Review:
I liked this a great deal.

It's a pairing I had never even considered previously, and it feels quite real and plausible.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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