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Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TrevaRea
Review:
Very good! Hope you continue.

Would there be a possible pairing between Buffy and Chris? Would really like to see that!

Treva
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from TerraLogan
Review:
I love it. I would love some more interaction with Buffy and Derek though. Maybe some romance as well? ;) Hahaha. Please continue regardless! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you - glad you're enjoying it! :-)
Review By [TerraLogan] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from misdom
Review:
This is awesome. I normally only read Willow or Dawn stories, so I was leary about a Buffy one. But this is turning out really good. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and thanks for commenting! Glad you're enjoying it :-)
Review By [misdom] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Rod
Review:
The first half of this chapter worked very nicely. The second half felt rushed, and not just because it was riddled with proof-reading errors. Your pacing was off, your tenses were all over the place, and it just didn't flow at all. It was almost like two different people were writing, it was that different. I think you need to go back and rework the second half of this chapter, at least to get rid of all the homophone errors and tense slippages. Sorry, but it really detracts from what has otherwise been a well-written story!
Comments from author:
Oops! Definitely will do. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Review By [Rod] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Blackett
Review:
Just finished Teen Wolf so naturally I'm on TtH looking for stories. Found yours and is great. Any chance that you will update soon?
Comments from author:
Shouldn't be too long, knock on wood. Between having to make one decision (I have two scenes in my head and drat have to pick one) and suddenly life getting busy... but hopefully soon. Really glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from winchestersgirl
Review:
This is very good, very well written.

And I like how Buffy was eyeing Derek. That's a pairing that I'd be very interested in seeing.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you -feedback is always great, and I'm having fun writing it!
Review By [winchestersgirl] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Rod
Review:
I've been generally enjoying this, but I don't think chapter 8 works particularly well. The main problem is that the point of view is constantly shifting, in places every paragraph. I understand that you have all this background of what various people's opinions of each other and the circumstances they find themselves in, and most of it needs to be got across eventually, but trying to do it all at once like this just makes me dizzy. It's far less confusing if you stick with one point of view for a whole section, or even a whole chapter if that's appropriate.
Comments from author:
First - thanks for reviewing, feedback is always great! I hadn't considered the POV thing (sorry for the mental whiplash) I'll try to be more careful in future chapters - it might be a case of me being a bit too caught up in my own head while I'm writing and not considering how it "reads". If that makes sense. Anyway, thanks again.
Review By [Rod] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Really enjoying this!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing! Having fun writing it :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from aveave
Review:
Great chapter. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it. I can't make any promises but I'll do my best to update regularly.
Review By [aveave] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from kyzhart
Review:
Loved the moloch reference and the bet about how many questions it would take. I also liked how Buffy was describing them. Just wait till Derek gets his brood on! Nicely written and I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying this, I know I'm having fun writing it!
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from WhiteWolf
Review:
This story doesn't deserve only one review. *grin*

Okay, I'm not familiar with the tv-serie Teen wolf. So far I like it. Want to see more.

One question though; Oz's bosses: are they part of the show? from another show? or original characters?

That's all.
Comments from author:
Ah, sorry that's a wait and see - fingers crossed I can actually make it work :-) 30 October - And just realised that I probably didn't really answer your question, as far as I know Oz's employers and pack don't appear anywhere else but I needed them so...
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AetherPrime
Review:
Good story so far. good job explaining and filling out your back story for Buffy and Oz. it makes the story much more believable and flow more naturally. looking forward to seeing more.

Aetherprime
Comments from author:
Thank you much appreciated!
Review By [AetherPrime] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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