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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Excellent fic. Thank you
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [21 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
This is worth continuing if you get the urge! :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tears of the Soul" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
The title of this story is a perfect fit. This is such a thoughtful and well thought out story, it's a crying shame the muse has gone away and left you here. :-/ The dialog and narrative flow so smoothly and you have all of the characters so well in voice that I can see and hear the story in my mind as I read it. I hope you can pick it back up some time, because I really want to see how Daniel and Lantesh (my favorite Tok'ra) work out. I think they are very well suited.

Thanks for posting the story so far, it's worth the read, finished or not.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from egastin
Review:
I really love this story. please update soon.
Review By [egastin] • Date [16 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from egastin
Review:
awesome story. love the Daniel/Lantesh parts.
Review By [egastin] • Date [29 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from lyapunov
Review:
I wondered when Sam/Jolinar was going to start to cross Daniel's mind... Interesting story, keep it coming : )
Review By [lyapunov] • Date [10 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from tals
Review:
Wow! This story is just... wow. You really have the characters down perfectly. Everything makes sense, everyone is acting as you'd expect them to under the circumstances. I am totally in awe of this story. It's just wonderful. Intense. Sad. Real.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Stacia
Review:
Oooo, I'm not surprised that Jack isn't taking this well. The tension was just right, and then you gave us a glimmer of hope at the end. Thanks.
Review By [Stacia] • Date [9 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from tals
Review:
This story is just getting better and better. I love how you show us more and more of Lantash and slowly explore what it is like to be bonded, to be a tok'ra. Your spelling, pace, dialogue, the flow of the story, are great as usual in your work. Thanks for sharing.

Your characterisation of Daniel and Lantash is great. You really show how conflicted Daniel is, and also that this isn't exactly ideal for Lantash. You manage to show both sides of the story, and that is part of the reason why your story is so engagĂ­ng.

Will you go more in depth with some of sg1's reactions to what has happened with Daniel? Especially Jack would probably have a hard time accepting it. Well, however you choose to proceed with this story, I am sure it's going to be well worth the read. Again, this was just a wonderful chapter.

Tals
Comments from author:
Yep! The next chapter shall give Daniel and Jack a chance to talk. . .though Goddess only knows how its going to end up between the two of them.
Review By [tals] • Date [20 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Wildecate
Review:
Beautiful. This is a wonderful original story - you've captured the relationship between host and symbiote so well. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
Review By [Wildecate] • Date [26 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tals
Review:
damn, that was great!!! i love the way you describe daniel's thoughts! great story!
did i mentiion i love it?
keep up the good work, it's a pleasure reading it.
tals
Review By [tals] • Date [25 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from keki
Review:
Poor Daniel and Lantesh, i'm really like this story and i can't wait for you to get out the next chapter.
I wonder what sam's reaction to Lantesh & Daiel will be.

waiting for the next chap.
peace,
keki
Review By [keki] • Date [25 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from javajunkie
Review:
too faboo. i have to say that i adore all of your stories. i am all a-twitter that you have begun writing SG-1 fic. i cant wait to see where you go with this seeing as daniel and sam are two of my favorite people on that show. no matter how it turns out i am sure you will take us on a wonderfull ride with this story.

sidda
Review By [javajunkie] • Date [25 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from renelf
Review:
This has something that few fics have: real emotion. You've written Daniel faithfully and he's reacting truthfully to what feels like a very real situation. It's brilliant and I'm looking forward to reading more (especially the part when Jack flips).
Review By [renelf] • Date [25 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tears of the Soul" from renelf
Review:
Um, wow. I think I've mentioned before that I love this Stargate phase you're going through. It was sheer genius to put Daniel in that position. With Sam it would have been too easy and with Jack it would have been a tragi-comedy but with Daniel it was filled with real feeling. The implications for Daniel's life (especially his relationship with Sam) are huge. Thank you so much for such a moving story. I would feel honoured to read more.
Review By [renelf] • Date [19 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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